I was only able to read the first chap since I'm in a hurry, but here:
I got into my car, everything around me strangely distant. Every word I said echoed around me, my voice obviously slurred and my movements jerky. I started up the car hesitantly, revving the engine too much and causing it to roar loudly. A mad grin spread across my face. What was wrong with me?
I like the description at the beginning. It drew me in instantly.
In fact, I liked the description throughout. Enough to create an atmosphere, but not too overdone. Billie's character was intact and realistic as well.
And the plot is very unique and interesting. Makes me wanna slap myself for not thinking of it myself.:tehe:
I promise to update soon...I'm sorry bout the wait, I've been really busy. I'm having to partly retrain my horse (Mr Brightside, who is my hero...I think) so stuff around here is pretty crazy. Besides that, I have two assignments...
i know you haven't updated in awhile.
but you should. and stuff..yeah..