fucking piece of shit! I was trying to write that fucking line in huge fucking font. pinche chingadera babosa le voy a dar putasos a fucking mibba it's moments like these that make me glad that I learned how to curse in Spanish! anyways. . . I fucking LOVED this tale. It was AMAZING!
Oh dear, I said the ending was perfect But this epilogue was even better. Oh, I loved everything about it, how the video had disappeared, the road trip (it made me want to book my plane ticket immediately), how they found Aldo, ... It was just too perfect! And when Aldo died, oh, I had to try so, so hard not to cry, and in the end I didn't manage to hold back the tears. Now I'm going to read that sequel immediately! :)
Awe Amber that was . . . AHHH I'm an emotional mess right now. I started crying when she was talking with Aldito. Reading sad things when it’s that special time was not a good idea, my brother walked into my room to grab something and was like, “Why are you crying?” And then I shouted that, “Aldito had died,” and that he needed to get the fuck out. I have a feeling that I'm going to have to awkwardly explain what happened in the morning . . . Anyways, I fucking LOVED THIS! SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL!
So sad that this story is over. I loved the ending and cried while reading the epilogue. I was hooked on this story from the beginning. I would love to see what happens next in a one or three-shot... or more? Absolutely enjoyed every minute of reading this.
"Une fin grandiose..." Serisouly, a perfect ending! I loved this story. I'm now impatient to read the epilogue. ... ... This is totally sequel-able though ;) ;)
I agree with the comment above, I'll be really sad when this story ends. I love the chapter though, with Hellstrom finally getting what he deserves... Now I don't know if I have to be impatient for the next chapter or sad because it'll be soon be over. You're torturing me woman! No, seriously, I loved that update, and I AM IMPATIENT to read what's happening next :)
I may not have died from waiting for that updated but I will most likely die from waiting to find out si mi papi chulo archie lives! I think I'm gonna rummage for some candles, Mexicans always have candles with saints lying around somewhere . . . loved the update! :)
I agree with Gwen! You need to update this story or I'll die! I kept giggling throughout the entire this! los pobres huevos de Danny :( que bueno que ya embarazo a una muchachita por que si no, no viera poder tenido hijos! and Archie <3 <3 <3 <3 that's a man! ;)
Ha, when I read this story had been updated, I shouted CHRISTMAS! and clapped my hands, and then my sister shot me a rather worried look... Oh, dear, oh dear what a chapter! It made me laugh quite a few times but... when I arrived at the end, I was like "nom de Dieu de nom de Dieu de nom de Dieu" (luckily I was alone at that point.) I don't know how I'll manage to wait now that Hellstrom's coming into the story. You must update or I'll die! Seriously. I need to read more!
That is what Nora was singing after she got laid. CEEEELLLEEEBRATE GOOD TIMES CUM ON and Chapter Ten just proved my belief that gingers are evil little creatures that are trying to screw everyone over since they’re pissed off that they can’t go out in the sun!
oh no! an evil gingaaaaa this should make my love for them decrease but it will not for I can not hate those majestic gingery creatures! and damn that amber, there's always time for a fuck, always!