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  • xstoriesyettounfoldx

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    Ok, this definitely is going to replace So Easy nicely. God I love this! Ilove the vagueness too because I like being a little confused. I can't wait for the next chapter :3
    October 30th, 2010 at 05:16am
  • C-u-on-the-Flipside

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    This story is very interesting. At first I thought it was going to be about Oliver, her, and the drugs but this chapter suggests something different. As much as I don't want So Easy to Love to end, this story will be interesting to read as well.
    October 26th, 2010 at 06:00pm
  • domious

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    This is so good! Its raw and powerful and its getting me so exicted. I can tell your exicted for the story too! You just told enough about the situation to get me going! I'm trying to figure out if her doing the drugs was in the future, and its going to go back to when she first met Oliver and started or something, or if its going to continue like it is now, thats she's what..off on her own and doing drugs and Oliver seems clean? I'm still a little confused, but I know all my questions will be answered! Can't wait for next week to read chapter 3, reeeeeally good job! :)
    October 26th, 2010 at 03:11pm
  • becca boo

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    I love how this is a polar opposite of your other Oliver Sykes story, the contrast totally pulls me in.
    As much as I don't want So Easy To Love to end, I really want this go be updated so I can find out more :)

    ps. the chapter titles...are they from poems/quotes by Richard Siken?
    October 26th, 2010 at 06:03am
  • KatieYDG

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    Wow it sounds like this is going to be a great story. Can't wait! :)
    October 23rd, 2010 at 10:08pm
  • this.is.sparkle!

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    Haha its soo dark and awesome!
    October 18th, 2010 at 06:25am
  • Maccbby

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    I like this,
    October 11th, 2010 at 05:40am
  • OneErection

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    This is a sequel? Woah woahhh woahhhhhh. Dude! This is fucking ace. She gets in drugs, welcome to reality <3 im gunna fucking love this
    October 10th, 2010 at 06:17am
  • tacky trashy taylor.

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    UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE PLEASE. c: so easy to love was fucking BOMB. best story i've read on here about any of bmth, by FAR. you are an amazing writer.
    October 10th, 2010 at 03:42am
  • Farrow

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    Jesus christ, if this is how So Easy To Love ends up...well, I can't wait to finish that story and start this one, it's truly shocking!
    October 9th, 2010 at 10:47am
  • Got Dynamite

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    This is going to be a very interesting story(:
    I am excited to read more!
    October 9th, 2010 at 02:08am
  • CharmedLuna

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    Dark and intense sounds good.
    I can't wait to read more.
    October 8th, 2010 at 08:35pm
  • X_hello_hello_X

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    Wow this story is going to be amazing. I seriously cannot wait for more! I love the idea of making it the complete opposite of so easy to love :)
    October 8th, 2010 at 02:37pm
  • femme fatale.

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    Wow. This is already addictive. (No pun intended)
    October 8th, 2010 at 08:39am
  • Syn_Sex

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    wow I gotta say that I loved the first chapter, you roughly described the characters sitation, so the reader has some image in their mind,w ithought givoing too much information!
    I loved the way you showed the reader not only how much they need the drugs, but also eachother.
    also like I said before, I love your style of writing!
    what especialy caught my eye was the last line:
    Because this all made sense. And nothing else did anymore.
    that line...I don't know how to say it, it was really intriguing!

    I really cant eait for this story to continue, even though I will miss so easy to love :(
    October 8th, 2010 at 06:56am
  • bmorr

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    love ittttt <3
    October 8th, 2010 at 04:49am
  • xstoriesyettounfoldx

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    I'm so excited for this, you have no idea. :3

    I hope your day gets better<3 I'm going to try and update Bad Luck for you :3 <33
    October 8th, 2010 at 03:31am
  • CharmedLuna

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    I already know it's going to be good :)
    I like the pic of Oliver, lol.
    October 1st, 2010 at 04:00am
  • narc0tics!

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    hi! i just wanted to say
    I LOVE THAT PIC OF OLI YOU USED FOR HIS LINKY THINGY!!!
    October 1st, 2010 at 03:58am