Melodies and Desires. - Comments

Yup this story is definitely a keeper! I like the whole idea of the project/them having to follow each other around. I can foresee some interesting things in the future haha. I really wanna know where she is going that she doesn't want John to go as well...so update soon :D

P.S. Being a girlfriend would be pretty fab haha just saying ;)

I really like this! And, being a girlfriend would be bitchin'. Just pretend I'm older so it's not perverted. ;)
John and Elena's relationship is like mine and my best guy friend's, except he makes more sexist jokes. It's funny. :') Can't wait for an update!

I totally love this story...
I think it would be pleasant, being stalked by John Ohh.

Totally a keeper, i absolutely love this, I wanna be a girlfriend lol

I love this story! I like how the two banter back and forth...it makes the story extremely entertaining :) I cant wait to see where this story is going to go from here!

This story is amazing!
and that picture of John...damn

ERM. I LOVE THE BANTER.
I LOVE THIS STORY.
I LOVE EVERYTHING ABOUT IT.
keep writing :):)

i love this so far <3

I feel weird commenting twice in one day but you put a new chapter up so yeah.
I love the playful banter between John and Elena
great story keep it up :)

I really really like this, John is funny can't wait for more ^^

i agree with goldminevalentine.
its really great and super well written, which very few stories on here are.
DONT DELETE IT.
i love the girl's personality already.
but yes update? :)

if you delete this i will come to your house and kill you, its that good

keep the story, please! this is so well-written, which is hard to come by on this site sometimes. and she's so witty, i love it! please keep writing.