amazing <3
October 12th, 2010 at 09:17pm
You used a very little amount of words to describe something so painful. I think you did a good job, especially the last few words. This really makes me wonder what kind of people they were and what kind of relationship they held. It also makes me wonder what happened after those painful days.
I like it when stories like this leave me wondering. It’s good in a sense because it makes me wish that there was more and that I could understand them. I think you did a good job with the prompt and I’m really happy I read this.
Good job mate.
