Once Upon Your Dead Body - Comments

This was sooo cool! As I read it, I actually thought it was a longer story, until I saw the comments...heh. Uh, well can I just say Brittina or however it was spelled (pardon my laziness) was reminiscent of something from an anime called Strike Witches. Regardless, I thought this really had potential to be something bigger, and it really does not feel complete they way it is. You managed to slide in so many details about the setting and world without being to "this is this, and that is that," if that makes any sense. This is rather original and refreshing from typical romance, abstractness, and depression I find in a number of Mibba stories. I liked it!

OOOHHH! This was good! I really, really, like this. Its very interesting and original (but all you're stuff I've read is).
Anyway, I hope you update soon.

First of all, I absolutely love the layout and banner, it's so pretty :)
Second, just to let you know, the and [img] didn't work. I hate when it does that for mine :)
Third, this piece was absolutely wonderful!
I love the character of Europa. She seems to be the type to behave, except for when she wants something she can't have :)
I didn't find any grammical mistakes, so your all good for that.
I found this enchanting and different.
Great job :)

“Can I read papa’s letters?”

I love your writing ability, this is beautifully written.
Short and sweet, just as it should be.

nice. (; I think this is pretty good, (; to bad it's not a long story...

I love the banner! Haha, it's so pretty.

As I hope you know, this came in third place in my contest!
I was really torn about where to place it, and I'm still torn.
The writing in this is very beautiful, and though slightly vague, I think I understood.
I like the challenge you presented with the vague feel to it, actually.

The only thing I didn't expecially like was the way the characters affected me.
It made me smile when I saw one had my username (happy dance!)
... but I just felt like I couldn't connect with them.
Maybe if it had been longer, like a chaptered story, this could have been easily solved.
But since I already share no sympathy with them, it was difficult to relate to them.
Thus making me slightly skeptical... in a way. It's hard for me to explain.

Regardless, I really loved the writing. You have an admirable talent, m'dear.
It really shines through this! I truly appreciate your hard work. <3