January 19th, 2008 at 06:41pm
I'm a Fake - Comments
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awww poor frankie. but he should have accepted her apolgyJanuary 19th, 2008 at 05:01pm
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Aw, at Frank.
Grr, at Frank.
This is great. I love it.January 19th, 2008 at 11:52am -
That's one extremely logn comment before mine... it's cute and i like it.
I agree with her too. :)
I'm glad she realized her mistake with Frank...he's still not all hyped up on Skittles and just being Frank in general though. It's still good. You don't have to make frank hyper, becasue it's your story and maybe he wasn't all hyper as a kid... whcih i don't think is true but.. you can make your character whatever way you want.
I hope you update soon!
Sunny-Lee <3January 19th, 2008 at 05:09am -
So I have to tell you right now that as soon as I finish writing this comment, I will most definitely subscribe to this story.Not only that, but I will read and comment the rest of your stories. Want to know why? Because I just so happen to think you are without a doubt the best author on this site just by reading this one story.
The plotline in itself was amazing. I love the way it all worked out and the way the whole story went smoothly. The way you executed the plot line in such a manner was excellent.
I like the way I could understand the way the whole story was going without being drowned completely in unnecessary detail. I think that was one of my favorite parts.
And honestly, I could very easily connect to the characters in this story, especially Frank. I feel like I've been through everything he's been through and you help me realize that. Er, well, minus the living with someone you love in your bedroom part.
But this was an excellent story. I just found it and felt that I had to comment it. Please update soon as I look forward to the impending events. You are extremely talented.January 19th, 2008 at 05:03am -
Hi. I'd just like for you to know that i think this is really great, and that will you please notify me when you post another chapter?
xxx
laceyJanuary 19th, 2008 at 04:40am -
awwwww poor Frankie!!!January 18th, 2008 at 06:50pm
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she feels...guilty?!?
oh my gosh.
DUH!
not only is she a bitch, she's an moron as well!
Frankie-boy's really found himself quite a keeper this time...
taking it too personally.
sorryJanuary 18th, 2008 at 06:34am -
plz update its super goodJanuary 18th, 2008 at 04:54am
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omfg ! I have to have more of the story ! NEED UPDATE !January 18th, 2008 at 04:25am
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hey... i'm one of the lovely comenters *smiles creepily*
That's right! She should feel guilty! Frankie is amazing and wonderful and he loves her and she's being a jerk and I don't like her jerkiness...
Although, Gerard is nice and wonderful and all that shazam, Frankie's hers. Gee should feel very bad. The jerk. They're both jerks... Sorry. I'm ranting.
Nice update :D
Sunny-Lee <3January 18th, 2008 at 04:09am -
GRRRRRRR!!!!January 18th, 2008 at 04:05am
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she is a bitch.
ugh.
update?January 18th, 2008 at 03:05am -
Okay... so that was a bit harsh... but i do want to know what happens.... I see serveral senarios, and like 2 are happy, like 8 are notJanuary 18th, 2008 at 12:54am
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she's a biiiiiiiiiiiiitch.... >_<
Yay! I want more!!! =DJanuary 18th, 2008 at 12:40am -
Love the story =D More update ? <3January 17th, 2008 at 03:47am
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Hey. I just started reading... I'm confused by something... wait... no, i'm upset... i don't know anymore! *ccries* okay, upset it is.
Frank's a hyper dude and you do not portray his hyperness... also, how old are Vanessa and Frankie in this story? And i'm upset that Vanessa is using Frankie dearest. I sure hope you update regularily, because i get bored...
*subscribes*
Sunny-Lee <3January 17th, 2008 at 03:12am -
what a biatch. lol
but I love this story.....can you make the chapter longer though?? =]]
<3January 17th, 2008 at 02:56am -
Haha 'keep it in your pants]
Rotfl
<3
*subscribes*January 17th, 2008 at 02:45am -
Oh, I wanna know what she's gonna do.January 17th, 2008 at 02:31am
more please?