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  • LadyLavellan

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    This is just awesome. It's hard to find a good Dragon Age story on here! Keep up the fantastic work and I can't wait to read more. :)
    November 17th, 2012 at 05:07am
  • momonetard

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    Amazing!! Its so hard to find a good dragon age story. Loving the story. I was more of a Alistair person, but it seems you have recruited me to the dark side :p
    January 30th, 2011 at 03:44am
  • Oligo122

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    Loving the story.
    There are some misspellings, like Vigil's Keep, not Virgils. And it's Tevinter, not Tentivater.
    I don't expect you to change them or anything, just for future reference.
    I really like the banter you've got giong between Jowan and Anders - it's really entertaining. And your Jowan is really convincing.
    Keep up the great work :)
    -C x
    January 15th, 2011 at 02:50am
  • vballPlaya21

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    ZEVRAN&TAL!?!?! OMG D: ahahahaha although that makes a LOT of sense that's just....NO. I love Tal though :P lol. he reminded me of Damon from TVD.....but yeahhh...anywayyyyy, great chap love! (x this story never fails to interest me (: can't wait till the next chapter! ^.^
    December 29th, 2010 at 09:00am
  • PforPan

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    Now that I'm caught up, I can post a comment! =D

    Anyway, I'm really loving this story. I'm a little glad that you rewrote it; it seems a lot more interesting now! *coughnotthatitwasntbeofreoranything>->cough*
    December 16th, 2010 at 12:22am
  • BloodlyR

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    That was a really great chapter~ Is it wrong that I'm more sad about the dog then Nate?
    December 15th, 2010 at 02:39am
  • AlfredFJones

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    Aww i'm kinda of sad that Nate is gone. I liked him...sometimes lol. And that other elf, the one with the ring he sounded cute! haha Can't wait to read more <3
    December 15th, 2010 at 02:09am
  • PeachyIrony

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    omgomgomgomgomg *spazz* Write faster women!!! *armflail/tackleglomp* I want more of your amazingnesssssssssssss! >w>
    December 10th, 2010 at 12:10am
  • vballPlaya21

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    I loveee it hun! (: can't wait for next chap!! xD continue continue :D <3
    November 24th, 2010 at 09:38am
  • AlfredFJones

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    Starting it differently from Failzilla huh? I like it. Can't wait to read more!
    November 14th, 2010 at 06:27pm
  • AngelFallen666

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    Love the story. Love the game. But I have to wait till christmas to play it again.=(
    October 12th, 2010 at 05:54pm
  • winchestergirl866

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    i love this story and i really need to play theses games hehe can't wait for more
    September 30th, 2010 at 11:10pm