Amazing!! Its so hard to find a good dragon age story. Loving the story. I was more of a Alistair person, but it seems you have recruited me to the dark side :p
Loving the story. There are some misspellings, like Vigil's Keep, not Virgils. And it's Tevinter, not Tentivater. I don't expect you to change them or anything, just for future reference. I really like the banter you've got giong between Jowan and Anders - it's really entertaining. And your Jowan is really convincing. Keep up the great work :) -C x
ZEVRAN&TAL!?!?! OMG D: ahahahaha although that makes a LOT of sense that's just....NO. I love Tal though :P lol. he reminded me of Damon from TVD.....but yeahhh...anywayyyyy, great chap love! (x this story never fails to interest me (: can't wait till the next chapter! ^.^
Anyway, I'm really loving this story. I'm a little glad that you rewrote it; it seems a lot more interesting now! *coughnotthatitwasntbeofreoranything>->cough*
Aww i'm kinda of sad that Nate is gone. I liked him...sometimes lol. And that other elf, the one with the ring he sounded cute! haha Can't wait to read more <3