Beautifully Written - Comments

Best Fricken story ever!

updates????

comment two.

He better not had cheated that would be terrible!!!
It is A O K if you don't put a sex scene I think this story will survive without it.

i love your story. . .
This is my first comment ever here in mibba . . .
I only comment to the ones i really really like. . .
I love the concept of the story. . .
I just hope that they will end up together . .
That she would find a heart to forgive him. . .
What did he do by the way?
Did he cheat? Or theres just a misunderstanding? . . .
I hope u update . .

ohhh snaps new commenter above lol.
She is such a little kid on the inside but I can't wait to see what happens.

I love the way this story is written. The point of view given, gives the story a whole new perspective on the relationship between them. Normally you get a female's point of view. I really like this story and hope you keep writing it until the end. =)

Boring no I thought it was tooooo cute and I'm a sucker for cuteness.

Just wanted to show everyone iow much he loves her. Super CUTE

I know the feeling about trying to make a love story but having no real experience, Just think about your fave movies and what you would want to happen

There was a mistake when you put she stood in from of him.

Finish it is awesome. can't wait for the update and I like that it is from a males prespective. I usually only run into slashes from a males prespective and that's not my thing.

Man I actually wsh church was longer now so I could finish reading this. Is good don't change the title I think it works well with the fact that he is writing letters. What happened to Mallory is sue now Stacy. Buy while I is goning on Im going to keep reading lol

oh yea i forgot to comment about the present tense chapter. It was short but i still wanna know what Ben did to hurt Annabelle. It was still an awesome chapter

Please don't kill the story! I'm enjoying and anticipating every update.I wish I could find someone like Ben.

My 2nd comment- I Love love love love love this story. If u stop writing i swear i will hunt u down and make you continue writing. LOL. Keep up the good writing

Loooooooooove this story. If this was a book i would buy 4 copies! Keep writing

So much love for your story <3

awww this was cute :D

Lol you sud do a beach sence where like they play beach volley ball and the girl beat them or something :D then they have a bonfire :DD and the kiss :DD ( lol just a thought) OORRR soemthing like a carvinal :D and uhhhh lollipop and like fun stuff and him win her a stuffed animal :D

awwwwww~~ please update soon:DDDD!!

I love this so much! The characters are adorable and I love the idea of it being like he's writing a letter to her.

awwwwww its sooo cute! i love it~ keep it up :DD