The Fear - Comments

  • IveNvr4gottenU

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    Kim, I'm completely hooked. By the way I didn't say this last time but I love the layout and the picture ;) I can't wait for chapter 3. I love all the character developement you're doing. Whatever you're doing it's working! Keep up the pure awesomeness.

    Ps. Oh Utah, I knew you'd write another great story.
    December 4th, 2010 at 09:52am
  • Nanook

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    Loved the update! :) Hm... aw, I feel bad for her, having to deal with being separated from Nick and him kind of avoiding her. And like with the contact being all weird and everything. But that makes their relationship... intriguing, by showing that as the way they work with each other. :) Overall, great update! Can't wait for more! :D
    November 27th, 2010 at 05:44am
  • Romeo_Edward_Luver

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    Hey, this is awesome. I even got the Great Gatsby reference! Write more. Now.
    November 20th, 2010 at 07:59pm
  • IveNvr4gottenU

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    I love this story Kim. I am seriously looking forward to the rest of it. In fact, type faster I need the next chapter :) But being cereal, this is a really good start and I can't wait for what comes next!

    PS.
    digging the layout :)
    October 29th, 2010 at 04:40am
  • Nanook

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    Hm... I like it. :) Love the idea you have going with this so far, and can't wait to see what else you have in store. More so, can't wait for more of this! I love your stories; they're all so amazing. :D
    Definitely... Subscribed! :D
    October 26th, 2010 at 02:15am
  • cookiepirate09

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    Yay! First comment!
    Alright two things to say; one: Whoa! :)
    Two: Please update soon! Can't wait to read more!
    :) ... or was that three? ;)
    October 25th, 2010 at 09:16am