i like how the layout is sweet and simple, and the banner is realy cute, i dont know, i just lke it! aww they're in love, i love romance, im such a sap xD its nice to think of love like that, when you find the one, your completely commited and head over heels for them :] this was a really cute, sweet story, good job :]
aww it's really cute! it's short (duhh...oneshot), simple and just plain cute! also, i really like how you wrote it. just reading the first sentence drew me in!
This is so freaking cute. I love it :3 I love the layout, it's simple but I think the banner goes perfectly with the story. I also like how the story is simple but sweet and tells it's own story. Really great job :)
I liked this :] I only spotted one grammar mistake that I make all the time lol at the end of a quote it should be a comma and not a period. Not a big deal though :]
and the banner is realy cute, i dont know, i just lke it!
aww they're in love, i love romance, im such a sap xD
its nice to think of love like that, when you find the one,
your completely commited and head over heels for them :]
this was a really cute, sweet story, good job :]