She and He - Comments

  • fascination.

    fascination. (100)

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    i like how the layout is sweet and simple,
    and the banner is realy cute, i dont know, i just lke it!
    aww they're in love, i love romance, im such a sap xD
    its nice to think of love like that, when you find the one,
    your completely commited and head over heels for them :]
    this was a really cute, sweet story, good job :]
    October 11th, 2010 at 11:58pm
  • Georgia Fair

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    D'aww! Cute, babe! Evie, I love it (: Glad it was short too, because I still need to catch up on sleep from the trip.
    October 4th, 2010 at 11:30am
  • castles in the sky

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    aww it's really cute! it's short (duhh...oneshot), simple and just plain cute! also, i really like how you wrote it. just reading the first sentence drew me in!
    October 1st, 2010 at 11:39pm
  • chemical romantics.

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    This unbelievably cute, seriously. I actually love how you've written an awkward guy, 'cause they're my favourite :D

    This is really great, good job! :)
    October 1st, 2010 at 04:37am
  • colorful language

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    This is so freaking cute. I love it :3 I love the layout, it's simple but I think the banner goes perfectly with the story. I also like how the story is simple but sweet and tells it's own story. Really great job :)
    October 1st, 2010 at 04:23am
  • samanthalynn;

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    I liked this :] I only spotted one grammar mistake that I make all the time lol at the end of a quote it should be a comma and not a period. Not a big deal though :]
    October 1st, 2010 at 04:20am