Broken Soul - Comments

Please write a sequel ;_;
pffft im still EvanXDannie idc what anyone says

im on CH 30 now and im like WILL THEY JUST KISS ALREADY OMFG

started and finished it same day. one word. sequel!

I just started reading this :p only on ch 2 but its very interesting :D

Thank you!<3

Oh my gosh, I just found this and it's so good. RAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

I have a bad feeling about what's to come.

I don't know hwo I feel about Erick now after that conversation..

I love how Dannie isn't scared of Erick, she trusts him. She isn't phased by him trying to scare her.

I don't like how Evan got rid of October, I liked her. But it's understandable and all

I'm really liking how this is turning out so far. It's good.

I like how Erick's started to teach Dannie how to protect herself. Her powers are pretty cool.

Hm, a nice little piece of danger for Dannie. Good thing Erick was there, eh? I'm so happy that Evan is starting to realize who Dannie is and I can't wait until she can start speaking the truth to him... She will, right?

I hope Evan realizes sooner rather than later that Dannie is the girl from his dreams

Wow. I'm glad that Erick was there to help Dannie and Evan get out of the fire.
I hope things go well at the ball

Wow, so a lot of demons are helping Dannie. :P One special gal. o3o Erick + Dannie! <3

She has a companion now, at least. [: Ooooooh, what an idea! I wonder if it is Erick now? o3o Myra seems really jealous of Dannie, I wonder if drama with start between them. >:] Intermeresting.

That's an interesting cat. I think that it might be Erick..?

Ah mah gash! :D:D:D:D I love you forever and ever! The drama is unfolding, yes, but now Evan and Dannie is closer! Yush! *Fist pumps the air.*

amazing! I love it! I'm glad that they're getting closer now.