AAH cliffhanger!! The next chapter had better come out soon because you're torturing your readers otherwise!! I really like this story, your characters are very badass and hopefully will only get more so as your story progresses =)
hey.! first coment.! i really like where this story is going. the words you use draw a picture in my mind so i can visualize whats going on. it's pretty good.! keep it up, and update please.!!!!