This Must be Fiction - Comments

Great chapter. I think it's your best one <3
You really described her mixed feelings towards becoming a vampire well, and Ville's as well. I'd like to have more discussions/arguements about her becoming a vampire, but that's just me, haha. The bit when she fainted? That was beautiful. Have you ever heard the music from Snatch, the bit at the wake? That music fitted perfectly with the whole chapter, haha. Oh, god. And the bit with them in the bathroom? Not only sweet, but also sexy. And guess what, perverted Katie thinks you should've carried on a wee bit more with it ;P

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-Katie

I started this story very early this morning and after a few distractions have finally got myself up to date. I am in love, plain and simple! Mixing my two favorite things together, Ville Valo and Vampires, was a very great idea. It's clear you are a good writer. I have felt the longing, fear, sadness and love that Molly has felt for Ville. Your emotional descriptions are very well written, as well as the little twists and turns. I had originally compared your story to Twilight but the more I read the further away that assumption went. This story is very original and thought through and I am dying for more. I must know what happens when Jonna shows up and if Molly will indeed become a vampire. Until then, I am your humble reader.

that chapter was so adorable!!!!! aghhh i love ittt!!!! MORE MORE MORE!!!

Every chapter make ME unbelievably happy :)
That was sweet. Her having a dodgy tan, him having dreads, her parents liking her etc. Very cute, although you just know that SOMETHING'S going to go wrong :3

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-Katie

Yeah, that update was so sweet.
Oh, and my parents were both in the navy ;D
However sweet it was though, Ville's obviously not alright with discussing her becoming a wampire. Or at least just yet.

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-Katie

this chapter was just fantastic!!! i looooove itt! i adore that they accept ville so much and how he fits right in. for some reason when I think of Molly I think ke$ha look alike. i'm sorry if that's an insult!! haha. :) cant wait for an update!

yaaaaaay reassuranceee :D heheehe i looooooooob this story!!! seriously. I want her to be changed by ville soooooo bad its not even funny. i'm so excited for them all meeting too!!!! great chapter!!!!

...AAAAANd he's going to.. MEET THE PARENTS O.o
I'm sure they'll love him. Hardy har. At the most, they're going to have to admit to reluctantly likikng him. And bless, she's dead upset about the fact that the bed doesn't smell like it should ;]

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-Katie

that chapter was fantastic!!! i loved it!!!! i cannot wait to find out what happens!!! ahhhhh update!!! :)

This wasn't short at all, and it definitely wasn't boring XD
In fact... Molly's going to become a vampire. It's all but settled :]
I'm suprised to be honest, I would've thought that Ville would have had more of a problem of making her a vampire,but maybe he was so upset about the situation that he just wanted it sorted. This chapter was amazing, I'm really impressed with it, and I really enjoyed it.

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-Katie
P.S- I never liked Jonna, the psycho hosebeast ;D

i still adore this story. just the thought of molly being a vampire changed by ville makes me all giddy :)! hehee. ftbu, fuck that bitch up!!!!!! good luck!! <3

Have you talked to the person about the whole issue? If you want any help or advice, I'm always here.

And the TALK. Haha, I was wondering when this was coming. You wrote it extremely well, and couldn't hve done it better. I was waiting for the next piece of drama, and I have a sneaking suspicion that it could involve her turning into a wampire... ;)

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-Katie

nice filler nevertheless :) And you should indeed report that person!
Or maybe talk to him/her and confront them.

As usual, the update was amazing.
I enjoy reading your story.
And as for the person who decided to steal your story, I'd report them or confront them in the nicest way possible.
I agree with KT4HIMx; if you stop writing you are letting them win.
Stay strong.
Keep up the good work.

Ah, babes. I really feel for you. Of course I'm gonna say 'Don't stop writing' and all that, but ultimately, it's up to you. If they're on Mibba, I'd report them to be honest. If you stop writing, that's letting them win. But I can understand why you'd want to go on hiatus. Message me if you have any problems or just need someone to talk to <3
Oh, I nearly forgot. The chapter was amazing!!

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-Katie

Hey :D
So I'm a New Subber.
This Is Amazing <3
update soon? xx

YAAAY! I heart Linde and Toni. Pure fluff, but amazing fluff :3

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-Katie

yay ville's house ^^

They're so sweet together, I love the way that she just accepted his 'tower', and he got Toni to come round and clean everything up for him :]

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-Katie

Ah that was so sweet <3 Love it!