This Must be Fiction - Comments

Don't worry, we all know that you haven't nicked the storyline off Twilight, this is original and really well written. And I agree. Nathan just seems really creepy to me, and I keep thinking that every time a modelling company contacts her, they're going to kidnap her or something like that. Lol. But that's just my paranoia coming to the surface ;]

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-Katie

le gasp! didn't see ville's leaving coming really. and i don't know why, but nathan just seems a bit creepy to me. i get that he's a nice guy, very generous, felt really bad, but he just strikes me the wrong way. i'm curious to see where this goes, the ville leaving thing. near the end it almost reminded me of... the second book in the twilight series, i can't remember the name,, but it just reminded me of that since he leaves and all ( i know the situations are different, etc). anyways, nice update!

Oh, that was beautiful. The interaction between them was gorgeous and the ending was just so sad. If I could give her a big hug to make her feel better, I'd reach into the computer screen now >.<

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-Katie

I absolutely adore this.

This is like a GOOD Twilight :3

so cute

Yeah, a dead sweet, nicely written little filler. ;3

heh. i liked how you worked the awkwardness :) her nonchalant attitude really amused me. there's a typo in the last paragraph: i'm assuming you meant "talked" but the word "walked" is used. but yea, entertaining filler :)

shiiiiit. not bad :) i'm already foreseeing random awkward scenes between them with this new knowledge. great read. very intense. :)

LMAO. I loved the authors' note ;]
She could have taken it a little better though XD can't wait for the next chapter x

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-Katie

Very intense, I agree :3
...So, Ville put himself inbetween her and the car? That's very gentleman-like. :D
I really want to find out what happens next, I get the feeling everything's going to be explained soon..

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-Katie

what a line to end a chapter with! intense read but oh so good :)

looooooooooooooved this chapter. can't wait for more, truly mean it

It was really great that this was super long, I really enjoyed it. I can understand completely why she'd be nervous about him being around Kat all the time, she's beautiful :D
Also, did she get hit by a car? :LLLLL
I'm really really nervously excited (?!) for the next chapter <3

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-Katie

That wasn't boring AT ALL! I kept thinking they were going to shag at the end, though XD

I was wondering if she was going to try something. Nice update!

fun. i was wondering when she'd mention him being cold to the touch. the moaning part was funny too

i like :) subscribed

ummmm i honestly dont even know lol

thanks for the update...and what did you mean with this 'More dangerous than that. I mean... well I can't really you what happened that night... '