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so sad i feel so bad for molly

but it was a awsome update :D

Great work for getting up at quater past four in the morning XD
Of course, this chapter was really sad though, especially the way that she clings onto every little peice of him that she can find. I'm really REALLY looking forward to the chapter where they meet again [as I'm sure that they will :D] to see each others' reactions. I'm not sure if Ville would be pissed off or regretful, and vice versa.

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-Katie

This chapter was intense! I'm not super sad or angry though, because you said that the story is simply taking a 'turn' and therefore it's nit done yet. :) haha

That was so beautifully written it made me cry :3
Can't wait for the next one... <33

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-Katie

awwww thats so freaken sad but it was a lovely update thank you :D

YAAAAY! That scene was perfectly, and beautifully written. It suited the chapter so much, and the sexual tension was just... Rawrworthy :3
Oh, and to reply to someones' comment, you go onto their profile and leave a comment xox

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-Katie

it's about time they confessed ;P but now i want to know what happens in the hangover/sober talk :D
please update again soon

xoxoxo

yay the real i FREKEN love you kiss :D

good chapter please update more :D

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Has nobody told you that ridiculously long really means ridiculously good?! XD Anyhoo...
Haha, that was an amazing chapter, I really liked it. Although now I sorta feel bad, because it feels like Kat's actually hacked off with me! lol.
I can't wait to find out what happens after the kiss. Will it be awkward, with them avoiding one another for a while, or will they continue with their lust-filled snogging shenanigans?! Ah, the thoughts in my head.

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-Katie

awww, yay we got to see Ville again! also, curious how Missy and Kat were rather, ahem, hissy. it feels like there's more to that than what was said, and I like it. can't wait for the next chapter!

I liked the way that you described the need for silence outside, it added a really sweet touch. And for the record, I never liked Missy. ;L

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-Katie

fun. i really liked the other perspectives of molly + ville in this chapter. it told alot more about their relationship. there were some grammar issues scattered throughout this chapter. nothing earth shattering, but it would add to the overall quality by cleaning it up a little. the flow of the story was great, though. can't wait to read about the party!

I'm suprised she wasn't a wee bit more worried than she was about Bam and Ville running off together! But I have a feeling that the drinks had a little bit to do with that ;]
Also, it seems almost as if Ville's avoiding her, and doesn't want to spend much time with her, which is obviously crapola. :[

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-Katie

interesting chapter. curious how ville and bam ran out so early in the night, though. can't wait to see what the drama is!

A very sweet little chapter >///<
I'm glad that he obviously feels excitement about seeing her again.

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-Katie

Cute. More please :) thank you!

I'm glad that her family didn't hold a grudge or have a mard, but if he'd have rang me up after months of nothingness, I would have tore him a new one ;]
Can't wait for the next chapter, it's not going to be long before they meet again :D
Also, the twist? Do they get drunk and uh... canoodle? :p

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-Katie

Girl, I have faith in you. This story is killer! I liked that she got caught up with family :)

like this chapter :) it's got such a lively vibe to it that the twilight bit is gone :D