Jealous? - Comments

Uh... I loved this! Loved it! Loved it! Loved it!!! I loved how jealous they got!!! It was awesome. Great story!

Loved it!!! Especially the 'Mine' part. That was my fav line:)

that was so hot I think I'm now brain damaged...
in a good way :P

THAT WAS Great!.
and it was not crappy. just very detailed ^-^

Gah, I loved this. It was not crappy - trust me, I've read crappy and that was not. :)

It had raw emotion and it was amusing to read. It was well written and very descriptive, it gave the story depth. And it made me grin like a fool and kind of giddy. ;D I liked the idea of the game they played to drive each other both nuts over the fact of how deeply they wanted each other, but how they both had to much pride to give into each their feels and let the other win. It was something I haven't exactly read before, and the idea of it was fresh and I enjoyed it. :)

I was surprised Matt gave in, usually the girl does, but that was what I loved. It wasn't cliché that way.

It was cute, let alone sexy and it was wonderful. :D

O.o Very... uh... *ahem* graphic, Ash........... *slowly shuffles away from you*
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Oh, who am I kidding?? I loved it!
Why?
Perfect writing! :D

This was NOT crappy! It was amazing.
I just loved all the emotions and details you put in this!
This was great. :) <3