Watch Out, Your Heart's On Fire! - Comments

I like this so far :)

ooo i like this, pretty awesome story line going :)

oh, yes, someone does like him! (giggles.)
update?

yay! now i know what he looks like=D
and ooooh. is it just a dream? i dont know!
update soon, please?

does that mean i make two? yay! lol
so, i love the name Landon, and Charlie seems like a cutie.
think you could maybe get some character pictures? if you cant, its alright. or at least, can you tell me what Landon looks like to Charlie, 'cause im having a hard time picturing, lol.
anywho, update soon?

comment virginity stolen :D
good start but you should probably fix the spelling it does detract a little from the story
besides that can't wait for another update