Knockout - Comments

WhisperingWinds; (100)

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I love this :D

I just don't get the Preface. Like, is it going to come in later in the story, or...? Yeah, hah xD But, really, it's awesome :D

December 19th, 2010 at 02:41am

mistresseulalie. (100)

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Okay, I'm going crazy about this story. I really like the layout, story line, everything. I would almost pay you to keep on writing this (but don't count on it) *smirkz*

November 4th, 2010 at 02:14am

imperfection. (100)

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WHAT? She dies? That's crazy! Chris, Pete, and Michael haven't even came in yet!!!!

October 6th, 2010 at 12:37am

KamiRawr. (100)

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Mm, I like how this started out.
Ah, a cliff-hanger; I'm so eager to read more.
I really like the story line, and I think this story is going to be very interesting.
Update soon! (:

October 3rd, 2010 at 01:41am