Nine Months. - Comments

I love the story =D
Thanks for welcoming me. Please can you read mine? Thanks xx

Keep on going. (;

I really like this so far.
Keep going :)

First I have to say I love Taylor Momsen.

Anyways I think I know where the story is heading. But I could be wrong.
I like this a lot. I always like reading these type of stories.

You may want to read over it though. I found maybe one or two grammatical mistakes.

Update soon. :D

Ooooh, I like this. Nice! :) Update soon!

I really really really like this.
The summary is awesome, the chapter is amazing.
Go go go!

Pretty good so far (:
Like everyone else said, epic summary!

The summary was amazing with drawing people in.
It made me want to read the story to find out what happens.
I kind of wish it was a little longer, and had a bit more detail -- it might have drawn more subscribers.
However, it was very well written, and I didn't see any mistakes.
Well done :)

I like it so far! No mistakes that I saw, and I like how you added the lines to the song in it...this was very good ! It is short, and I'm going to subsribe...so update!

I like how you started this, The first bit is more repetitive (of the summary) but, besides that It's pretty cool. I'm going to subscribe to this so I can give you a better review.

It's short, but it's pretty sweet (:

first of all, i would like to say that i love the summary! it really draws a person in :)

the first line has just one spelling error, you wrote viens. it's supposed to be veins. but hey, everyone makes spelling mistakes! i make 'em all the time.

the chapter is short but it has potential to be great! i'm going to sub just to see where this goes, though i'm guessing she's going to get knocked up? anyway i haven't read much pregnancy stories (if it is. sorry i'm slow!) so i'll give this a shot since i think it's pretty good.

oh and one more thing: you had another misspelling: impaciently. it's actually impatiently. you only had two misspelled words, so it's not really worth mentioning, but i thought i'd just point it out there, since it might benefit you in the future?

oh and i love how you used one of Drake's song in this chapter! i can't wait for more, so update soon?