This was pretty good too. Much sadder, though. But still good.
I really like how the thing she was most broken up about was the fact that she'd said some hurtful things, not that she wouldn't live to do this, or that, or whatever she may have wanted to do.
I really like how the thing she was most broken up about was the fact that she'd said some hurtful things, not that she wouldn't live to do this, or that, or whatever she may have wanted to do.
The ending was pretty well done, too.
Good job :)