Temporary Bliss - Comments

Damn.
That's all I can say...
Damn.

This was absolutely wonderful; one of your best works yet.
The detail in this was spectacular, as well as just the way you described Joe.
I hate the fact that he relies on her, and even though she's using him, he still needs her, wants her.
I don't want this to end negatively. I want him to find someone else, or tell her that he needs something real, which isn't her.
You're so talented, Dear. Don't think differently.

Holy shit. This is fantastic, mind blowing, extraordinary!
First off, the snipit you gave me did not do justice as to when I read it for the... fifteenth time? Haha, yes. You describe everything so vivid that it's like a film rolling in my mind. My Joe Hoe Level just went up about tweny notches.
Secondly, Victoria... I'm just going to call her a maneater, it sounds about right. And a whore, however, maybe she actually likes/loves Joe. Who knows? Only you.
Third, I LOVE THIS SO MUCH AND I LOVE YOU, EMILY.
Cannot wait for the second part(: