Abandoned. - Comments

So short but it was so lovely.

Such a short amount of words hold so much emotion. Wow. it kind of reminds me of someone... </3

You did a fantastic job here! Keep writing!

I liked this :) It's so raw, which really releases the emotion. Also, you managed to tell a full story within a hundred words, so great job on that :D Gorgeous layout as well.

This is heartbreaking, especially for something so short. I loved the line, "I hated that letter, scrawled out so casually in her flowing handwriting." It was probably my favorite in the piece. I can't get over how beautiful this was. There wasn't much detail, but there was a hell of a lot of emotion packed into what detail there was. You did a really great job with this <3

I really liked this. I was expecting it to be a break-up letter between a couple, so it was extra heartbreaking when I found out it was from her mother. It was so well-written and full of emotion too, for one hundred words exactly. The layout was beautiful too. This was a really enjoyable read, great job. Well done =D

I love this.

"I hated that letter, scrawled out so casually in her flowing handwriting."
Beautiful line. It felt like it held a lot of emotion in it and I just loved how that sentence flowed.

I love how the layout with the picture of the tattooed chick tied in with the story. Very nice. :D
Simple, yet said a lot which can be very difficult to do in 100 words. You mastered it perfectly.

Great job. :)