You're the Light on the Dark Side of Me - Comments

  • Totidem Verbis

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    That was...so much just happened that my head is kinda spinning. I was so excited for Paty when she got the lead role, and I was a little bummed out that Justin didn't get the star role beside her. I also thought Oliver was just the usual kind of jerk, but he's a vampire?! Wonderful twist, hun. I definitely did not see that coming, but now I'm so curious about everything else. Who are the new people that stopped Oliver? What did he mean when he said "It's her."? Who's the master guy? And, if I'm not mistaken, Justin somehow knew that Oliver was a vampire because he threw something in his face...

    This chapter was amazing, hun! I can't wait to see what happens next. And you're welcome for all the support! You know how much I love your stories :)
    June 17th, 2012 at 06:31am
  • Sansa Stark

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    Estás aqui! Acho que não podes ter links nos capítulos, já fui reported por causa desse negócio -_- Mas gosto da história, fizeste um Jared amoroso. Só uma coisa, se calhar devias meter as letras mais clarinhas porque assim torna-se difícil ler. Só li os dois primeiros mas estou a gostar, apesar de eu não ser super fã do Jared, He's cute x)
    June 16th, 2012 at 07:10pm
  • Totidem Verbis

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    I loved this chapter! It was emotional, and I'm pretty sure we got to see a peek of Jared's POV. I'm kinda glad that Paty's moving on, because Justin is just a sweetheart...but if she had been alone, she might have seen Jared! I mean, he was right there! If it was Jared...I think I'm right. I hope I'm right.

    So, the next chapter starts present time? I can't wait!
    June 13th, 2012 at 06:54am
  • Totidem Verbis

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    I agree, fillers are important! Without this chapter, we wouldn't see how Paty was able to adjust to her new college life or meet Justin! I like Justin, by the way. He seems like a good guy, but I'm worried about Paty. I know she's trying to move on, but Jared meant so much to her...

    I can't wait for the next chapter, hun! I know it'll be amazing :)
    June 6th, 2012 at 08:28pm
  • Totidem Verbis

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    I love Dr. Downey Jr! He really is a good doctor. As for the scream into the pillow thing, I've done that more times than I can count. It really is a good stress reliever, huh?

    I'm glad that Paty is going to NY. She needs to move on and keep living her life. I can't wait for the time skip :)
    June 2nd, 2012 at 12:24am
  • BlueDreams

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    Hey Hun! Thank you so much for your comment!
    I've been working on my story, so I hope to update soon :)
    May 13th, 2012 at 08:19pm
  • Totidem Verbis

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    That last chapter was just...Wow. I nearly cried, but I managed to hold myself together. Jared's funeral was just so sad, then she was so upset, and now Shannon's leaving. I like the psychologist though. I love psychology, but I think having Robert as a psychologist makes me love it anymore. lol.

    I know you'll think of something amazing for this story, hun, and I can't wait to read it!
    May 13th, 2012 at 08:17pm
  • OverThereOnMars

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    awe poor jared...i loved it...thank you for the chapter!
    November 21st, 2010 at 05:55am
  • Larenstiina

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    Amazing start!
    I can't wait for the next update ;)
    October 21st, 2010 at 08:12pm
  • Draconia

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    Hi there - another Jared story! So glad your writing one again. I can't wait for the next update. I know this is going to be good because you write great stories.
    October 17th, 2010 at 06:45am
  • Lost Cause

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    YAY!!! First Comment!!

    I love this story already, Paty! The first chapter was so emotional and so much has already happened. And when Colin and Jared were fighting, I had a few "Fight Club" flash backs. lol.

    I am definitely subscribing, and I'll be patiently waiting for your next update!
    October 11th, 2010 at 12:57am