The opening is amazing. You can tell the two people who are making out, about to fuck are really into one another and aren’t just doing this for a cheep fuck. But, it gets even better when she has to hide in the wardrobe and they’re identified.
I can understand why Tom doesn’t want Danny to know that yes, he’s fucking about with his little sister Stella ‘cause you shouldn’t ever get with a friend/band mates sister. Ever. It’s against the rules.
The second part, showing how they meet in real life and explaining how they’ve been talking on the phone a while makes me smile. Danny is so confused by their conversation and how they’re already friends even though he’s just introduced them. It’s kind of a little cute.
I love how awkwardly cute their first kiss and telling each other how they link one another is. It’s adorable, it really is and I love it. I just want to know what’s so complicated between Tom and Danny, seriously. Are they kind of together or something?
They were kissing and holding hands and being all cute with one another when Danny was there only, behind his back? How messed up is that!? I love it though, I really do. It adds to the drama of the piece and is kind of REALLY cute. Honest to God.
I hate the anger of Danny’s. He’s a bit of a drama queen with how he’s overacted about Tom and Stella hooking up. The emotion that runs through really seeps out onto the reader and makes them feel the same pain; my heart is pounding right now and my veins are full of anger towards Stella and Tom.
I love how cute the ending is. Tom and Stella are allowed to be together, Danny is moving on and the happy couple are able to share a joke about waiting a month or maybe even a year before telling Dougie. Cute. Too cute.
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This is a great story that I’d have read on Mibba if I’d seen it up. I really enjoyed the mood of it and how it all comes together in the end. Great. It really is.
I can understand why Tom doesn’t want Danny to know that yes, he’s fucking about with his little sister Stella ‘cause you shouldn’t ever get with a friend/band mates sister. Ever. It’s against the rules.
The second part, showing how they meet in real life and explaining how they’ve been talking on the phone a while makes me smile. Danny is so confused by their conversation and how they’re already friends even though he’s just introduced them. It’s kind of a little cute.
I love how awkwardly cute their first kiss and telling each other how they link one another is. It’s adorable, it really is and I love it. I just want to know what’s so complicated between Tom and Danny, seriously. Are they kind of together or something?
They were kissing and holding hands and being all cute with one another when Danny was there only, behind his back? How messed up is that!? I love it though, I really do. It adds to the drama of the piece and is kind of REALLY cute. Honest to God.
I hate the anger of Danny’s. He’s a bit of a drama queen with how he’s overacted about Tom and Stella hooking up. The emotion that runs through really seeps out onto the reader and makes them feel the same pain; my heart is pounding right now and my veins are full of anger towards Stella and Tom.
I love how cute the ending is. Tom and Stella are allowed to be together, Danny is moving on and the happy couple are able to share a joke about waiting a month or maybe even a year before telling Dougie. Cute. Too cute.
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This is a great story that I’d have read on Mibba if I’d seen it up. I really enjoyed the mood of it and how it all comes together in the end. Great. It really is.