Because You're Up There - Comments

... it always gets me:'( i love it though(:

-bailey and Rian forever<3

This is great, so great... I cried, i loved it so much :,) amazing job

amazing.

that's an understatement.

Tragic.
I really liked the last paragraph.
Didn't cry though. I'm probably just an emotionless person. :p

I don't cry at anything, so if a story can make me cry the author is bloody fantastic.
You succeeded in this.
This was amazing, you put a lot of emotion in this which has reflected into your readers.

I cried.
I cannot even.
This was so sad, oh my God.
It was more than sad.
It was beautiful.

Katie,
It takes a lot to make this chick cry..
that's gotta mean this was a pretty damn good story. :D

Okay, just from the title, I can tell it's going to be sad :[
aww, they seem really really close :]
what? he watched her die? oh gosh, that would kill me
alright, almost in tears already, oh my gosh
he watched her die, because of a damn car ugh!
Gosh, this is so sad, poor Rian
damn this is terrible :[ they'll never be able to be together
only when he dies, when he gets to see her again
years and years and years from now :[
gosh, really really well written, not going to lie
but oh my gosh, talk about a tear jerker! holy shit!
This was absolutely amazing, no errors at all
you used the quote perfectly, the whole thing based around it,
it was amazing. truly fantastic. good job :]