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  • Wings of the Night

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    I love this story!
    one update a day is not enuff!
    please update some more!
    please!
    October 16th, 2010 at 03:11pm
  • Zacky's Beotch

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    it bugs me that she keeps calling him a rapist in her head, yet never actually confronts him about it or calls him that outloud. i mean, really. if she just gave him a chance to explain everything, then maybe, just maybe, she wouldn't be a bratty bitch. i mean, come on. sorry for my ranting, it just irks me when i see stuff like that, it makes me want to fix it :P
    October 16th, 2010 at 02:59pm
  • Brooke5683

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    love your story,
    it interesting,
    please update!!
    <3
    October 16th, 2010 at 02:44pm
  • conk

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    I have to admit, this wouldn't normally be my type of story, and I clicked on this quite by accident, but I definitely loved what I read.
    Very well written. I'm definitely hooked. Keep up the good work!
    October 16th, 2010 at 02:42pm
  • Marauding Marlen

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    i reallly like it!, scratch that. i freakin LOVE it! i jumped out of my seat when i saw that it ended there!
    please update soon! :D
    October 16th, 2010 at 03:54am
  • Cecila220

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    PllllZzzzz upload
    October 16th, 2010 at 02:10am
  • saewin

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    lmao @ where it left off. this is great. :)
    October 16th, 2010 at 01:54am
  • Hayleyniicole

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    is it wrong to wish he would rape her?? Anna is a weird cookie whom at the moment im not liking. I think id rather stay in a house with a crazy raping psycho then go out alone at night into the woods and risk being eaten by mutant dogs...yeah rapist anyday thank you!!

    UPDATE SOON PLEASE!! I wanna see Anna get into trouble for kneeing him and stupidly running away, yeah i hope he hurts her...is that wrong to want to have that happen?? Please let Derek tell her off and hopefully sexually abuse her *grins like a madman* don't blame me, blame my mother for having me *shifty eyes* UPDATE (i say screaming then pouting like a two year old) :) sorry, i haven't had my coffee today!!
    October 16th, 2010 at 01:47am
  • Ultraviolet Light

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    awww he cried!
    psh we all know she likes the 'rapist'
    October 15th, 2010 at 10:12pm
  • ZombieChild

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    lmao his 2 inch dick :P
    October 15th, 2010 at 09:05pm
  • pjfunnbunny

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    lol, i mean 11 xP
    October 15th, 2010 at 03:44pm
  • pjfunnbunny

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    hi! (:
    i really like chapter 10 please update soon (x
    October 15th, 2010 at 03:43pm
  • xBuiltxForxSin

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    lmao at the last update :') I love this story so much <3 <3 <3 ^__^
    October 15th, 2010 at 03:17pm
  • Shadowsgirl

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    love it!
    I can't wait till you update again!:)
    October 15th, 2010 at 02:52pm
  • you're_addicted

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    =O.....YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY \^O^/ SO EXCITED! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
    October 13th, 2010 at 02:38am
  • Randomness Addict

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    i lovee the story.
    Extremely good.
    Although the everyone seems to have anger problems...
    lol :)
    October 13th, 2010 at 02:17am
  • calmcommodity

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    Ok so the guy is being weird considering they only met that day but... I like him so that can continue :) and since you have so many devoted and lovely readers then could you post more pretty pretty please?
    October 13th, 2010 at 02:16am
  • Ultraviolet Light

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    ahhh he kissed her!!!!
    :D
    October 13th, 2010 at 12:06am
  • Ultraviolet Light

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    loved the update!!!
    same @xBuiltxForxSin i love that she calls him that too!
    October 12th, 2010 at 11:25pm
  • xBuiltxForxSin

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    I love that she calls him the 'rapist' and truthfully, i really hope that never stops xD Loved the update, thank you :D xx
    October 12th, 2010 at 11:04pm
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