Aw, that was fucking adorable! And now I'm fucking jazzed to read part three! LOL, I know your laptop is broken & all, but please update as soon as you can, dear. I'm sure the next part is going to be as brilliant as everything else you write. :]
Aww, I'm so happy they're getting married! I know things have been tough for them, but you can tell they love each other a lot so I think them getting married is perfect. & LOL & marrying the Hulk! I laughed like such a maniac, hahaha. AND A PART FUCKING THREE! Dude, I'm so excited, cuz quite frankly, I'm not ready for this story to be over. Seriously, reading this is enjoyable as hell, because the storyline is so easy to get into. I think the chemistry that Matt and Taylor have is so fucking realistic, and I have to say, the drama is completely addicting. So yes, a part three would be fantastic. I can't wait to read that shit, so please post more when you can! <3
WHOA! All those updates were fucking amazing! Your stories have a certain realness to them that is just out of this world, to the point where I read it & I temporarily forget reality. I get so wrapped up in the storyline. & I think you did so well with the character emotions, like the way it all seems so realistic. I can honestly see why Taylor can't bring herself to Aron. I mean, he's a fucking asshole so you'd think hate would be her first instinct, but you'd be surprised how easy it is to continue caring for a guy even when he's really hurt you. My last bf was a fucking prick that used the shit out of me, but I don't completely hate him cuz I can also remember having a lot of fun and feeling really happy with him. Then again, I definitely wouldn't say that I could ever "love him". IDK, the point is that I loved how you could convey that in Taylor, because it's extremely realistic. On a lighter note, OMGGGGGG @ their angry sex! I thought their fight was kind of fucked up, cuz they were saying some pretty cruel things to each other (although it's understandable), but then their attraction to each other kicks in and it becomes this crazy, hate-filled fuck session! It was really... vivid. But also very sexy and fun-sounding. :D Hah, seriously, I love how you described it! Oh, and by the way, I'm fucking glad Aron's going to jail. In spite of Taylor's emotional conflict with the situation, I have to say: I think he's a definite asshole. In any case, he def. has some anger issues. LOL, but anyway, the bottom line is that the updates were fucking extraordinary. I really do love reading this story, my dear. And I hope you post more soon!
AHHHHHHHHHHHHH OMG OMG OMFG I LOVEEEEEE!!!!!! and i agree with nanagoesroar!!!! i may be writing a form of that line in my brian story if that's okay with you? lovin the story sooooo good. annndddddd you should check out my brian fanfic. its bitter sweet symphony and like....30some chapters atm annndddddd i have an mcr fanfic if you like mcr XD
Just so you know, I'm fucking hung up and giggling uncontrolablly for days with this line :“You live in a huge fucking house with a tiny little dog. You talk a bunch of shit, like a cocky bastard, but if no one knew better, they’d think you were gay.”
=/ I was kinda sad at the beginning of this when she said that she loved Aron. but i got happy at the end ;] i hope that Matt can change her mind <3 Michele
LOL, I know your laptop is broken & all, but please update as soon as you can, dear.
I'm sure the next part is going to be as brilliant as everything else you write. :]