It's okay. I think no matter how long you have the chapter I would still wish it to be longer. That sounds REALLY uncomfortable to have eleven people in a car. That's even more than when my godfather squeshed us eight kids and him in his lil ford. Cause I'm a girl I had to sit on my cousins friend's lap and he kept "accidently" touching my thighs...anyways I liked the chapter. still wondering about the brother and can't wait to find out more information on him and the other people she's with. The driver, roxy's brother I think...see more convo with him on his opinion about the runaways, maybe some overprotective brother stuff...can't wait til next update.
I only wish your chapters were longer...sigh anyways I love the new BROTHER added to the story. I can't wait to see what happens there...how do I give you gold stars? Sorry if it sounds like a stupid question but I don't know how to.