Scarred - Comments

Ohmygod. Ohmygod. Ohmygod.
I bow down to your genius.
This is so good, like seriously and this is coming from someone that isn't the biggest supernatural fan, but it's so good, I can't even at the moment.

I want to applause you for using the second person, but mostly, for using it so well, I am a second person person and I applause how well you dealt with it, it can easily get overwhelming, but in this piece, it's just what the piece needed to felt truely alive.

I could feel exactly as if the voice was the one in my own head, for which I want to point out the fact that I adore how you never used a name, I really do, I like being able to imagine how the characters are instead of having to identify them to an already built mold.

I really love the plot too, and I also absolutely adore how you described the feeling's evolution.

I just love this piece, so much.

Not a problem. Awesomeness deserves recognition.

@ collectivision
Thank you very much for reading and commenting, I'm glad you enjoy it :D

Okay, wow. Not normally a fan of second person but I was just enthralled. This is amazing.

This is really good! Writing it in second person really makes you feel the emotions Dean is feeling. Again, you are a really good author!

Dean freakin' Winchester.

Jeez, this was really great. It was well written and I felt the pain that Dean went through. I think everything you wrote was a perfect description of what he went through while in Hell. This was really good!

This is hell good! :D

If this didn't win that competition then the other entries must have been beyond amazing! This was awesome and emotional.
:)

Whooaaaaah. This was epic and totally awesome :D
I really liked it, and Dean looks sooooooo nice in that picture!
Well, he always looks nice but, you know :)
Yeahh, i rally loved this :)

Wow. This was just down right fucking amazing. Brilliant, seriously, I loved it. It was just...wow. <3 AMAZING job and I hope you win!

OH MY SAMMY
his was brilliant... I was speechless the whole time I kind of cried a little as well... so sad but so true... I feel like if dean could ever share his real true feelings this would totally sum up all of season 4 and 5 it's crazy good... ure so talented <3

This was beautiful; thank you for an amazing experience of reading it.

Wow this was amazing

Every word of this was brilliant, and I love how you put the prompt to good use. This was a very well written character study of who Dean was during and after Hell, and I think writing it in second person made it all the more effective.

This was my favourite line: You tell yourself it has nothing to do with him; you’re broken for your own reasons. Something about it was eerie and true.