October 5th, 2010 at 12:14am
I loved this and thought it was really well written, but it really needs an ending.
The story finishing was a rather unwelcome surprise, it didn't really conclude at all
And even though it's missing something like that, what's there is brilliantly written...Give it a proper ending and it'll be awesome :)
Although the ending wasn't very solid, it was a moment in time, this one shot was. I understand if it was hard to know how to end something like this, as we don't know what's going to happen in the episode itself, so we can't just end it with either Burt waking up or showing signs of movement, or his life ending, because we don't know what's going to happen.
But I loved it.
“Dad, please…” Kurt tried again, desperately squeezing his father’s hand in an attempt to wake him up. “You’re going to miss Deadliest Catch. It’s your favorite, remember? C’mon. Carole’s waiting for you. Please wake up, Dad.” He begged.
Even though Burt's just in a coma, this part reminded me of when Mufasa died in The Lion King and Simba wanted him to wake up.