Unexpected Beauty - Comments

This is sweet. I love that she could find so much peace just by watching nature. And that's really awesome because I don't know if I could do that even. I get bored so easily and as much as I would love to sit and watch the sunset...I'm impatient. Ha. :) I adore Marcella, and that name is absolutely perfect as well. XD You're quite the author my dear.

Ah, imagery. There's just something about that, isn't there? It doesn't matter that I wasn't actually standing on a hill watching the sunset, feeling my bad mood wash away. Your imagery made it seem that way. That's what I love about authors who can really do that. I don't care so much about that character. I care about what the story can do for me. XD Selfish, maybe, but that's the way it is.

Great job with this story. I really liked it. I liked how we didn't really know what happened to her, but it didn't matter. We can all relate, so we all know what it's like to be in that state of mind.