Des Larmes D'amour - Comments

Where are the chapters?

Wow, I really like this story! I love the way you write and I love the amount of detail you put into this!
I can definitely tell that you've worked hard on this marvelous story. Keep up the great work, sweetie!
P.S: Beautiful layout. (:
<3

Mr. W of all people?! Isn't he the boring teacher from history or something? Why would he get fired??!!

I really really liked this!
It's actually original and well-written.
The plot is pretty... amazing. :D

I like Rory's character. My favorite. :)

This is absolutely wonderful in every way possible. It's my new favorite story on Mibba. :) You write with such a talent I feel like I'm reading a book by a professional author.

You decribe everything in such detail, plus the entire story is magnificant. I have subscribed and I'll be on every day to see if you update. Keep doing a wonderful, amazing job. :)

Omg. So her mom wasn't playing Clair de Lune?! Update soon please!!!!

Nice chapter. This chapter has got me confused.. Who's Micah?! Ahh!! Why is he in Rory's dreams?! Why is he coming back? He's hot though..

I like Clair de Lune but the sailor locket song sounds creepy, I didn't listen to all of it. Was that the song Rory and Micah were dancing to??

So. I'd really love you if you updated some more. I noticed a typo in the point of view. It was right after Micah said Rory's name. Other than that, wonderfully written. Please update soon (:

You put it back up! =D

Now Royce? Well, I just wanna eat him up!

Umm.. Awkward moment.. Chrissie is a dear! I love him so! He's an amazing friend.

first off, layout. Oh my goodness, gorgeous is the only word I can think of to describe it :)
ohh a vampire story, that should be cool :) I like orginal fantasy stories
oh, so the vampires all died off because they got too greedy for blood?
just a really good summary honeslty, and it wasn't too short, nor too long
glad you got that History is a boring class. honestly the vain of my existence xD
haha gosh I can totally relate to this girl. She hates History for one
and she also just seems like a regular teenage girl, which I like very much :)
since you've already mentioned vampires, I'm interested to see how that plays in with her
He is tlaking about vampires? So, this was like a real, regular thing in society?
I really like that idea. so its not like this weird thing that nobody knows about
I like how you have so much background information on the vampires
It makes them seem like they really were in the Earth's history
Oh like a super bad thing that none of the studnets can hear? I wanna know what it is!
whoa! she's a crier? as in a vampire? as in they still exist?
that was a twist i was defaintely not expecitng, and it was so blunt
ahh that was a really good idea to introduce it :)
this was freaking amazing. you are a fantastic writer
and with good ideas too. I will not be surprised if i see your work in a bookstore someday :)
I have every belief that you will get published. amazing job!

Me again. This is absolutely riveting. Save for a few minor errors, you are incredible! My favorite story by far, and I'm quite picky.

This story stinks of win.

Umf, I think this is one of my favourite things I've ever seen of yours, its really nice. It just demands your attention in a way unlike most which tend to be either too monotonous and you have to force yourself to read on or are too vague to the point of a headache when you continue trying to pick up on all the details. Your description and background for this story blows me away, the idea is just so neat and I.. love it. Another thing is your characterisation, its one of my favourite aspect of your writing but its so much more in this. They're real people - my friends, kids I know in school, characters I've written or read, etc, etc.

You make me glow with jealousy, I'll keep breathing though, I'm waiting for more of this..
<3

We both know you lied when you described this story as "craptastic". I only read the first chapter so far, but felt compelled to comment. I will be reading the rest tonight. Your writing is incredibly lovely. I usually ignore vamp stories, but this one was so original and extremely well thought out. Bravo. :)

Woah. This is insanely good and as far as I know, it's a completely original plot. Who would've ever thought vampires would move on to tears? Haha

YAY! :) Happy new year to us, eh? xD lol.

Still as lovely as ever :D

Still loving it!!
A fresh start, eh? What a great way to start the new year!

Oh. My. God.

Your story is amazing!! You have a beautiful writing style, and I've never seen anything like this. Ever. When you finish this, I think it would be great to get it published, people would love it :D

Can't wait for the update!

Lovely, Ava.

Truly lovely.

I normally don't enjoy vampire stories, but this is amazing.

The layout is gorgeous.

You're talented.

Truly.