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  • thumbtac

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    Nice fairy tale.
    February 4th, 2013 at 07:26am
  • lostpuzzlepiece

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    woaaah . didn't think it was gonna end that way ! thought i was gonna see the baby ! (':
    June 29th, 2012 at 02:33am
  • liliesinthedarkness

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    This won second in my contest so heres my detailed comment,
    Very fast moving and interesting, you kept it simple and to the point, a lot of emotion, kept the emotions real, characters were realistic, very well written, the story had some twists which kept me guessing, overall you did a terrific job.
    December 3rd, 2010 at 02:23am
  • HailMisery

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    I love it.. you must make sequel.... make sequel :P

    I really want to know what happens:)
    November 26th, 2010 at 06:29am
  • x.MrsAlexGaskarth.x

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    Yay!!!
    Updated and ..... that was like A-MAZING!!!
    Ver nice ending but what's gonna happen next??
    (If there is a next?..... which I very much hope there will be :))
    More soonish... kinda ... maybe??
    November 9th, 2010 at 07:22pm
  • Moosey

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    OH MAH GAAAAAAAAAAAAWD.
    Hehe, nice ending; very sweet but I'd say things happened alittle too fast with the parents. They could have had a longer conversation about how things are going to work out but I suppose you could have been aiming for the mysterious ending so I'll just leave it ;)

    Very nice one shot ^_^
    I was about to type moar soon plz but I forgot XD
    Good work honey :3
    November 7th, 2010 at 12:26pm
  • bloodravyn

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    wow...
    November 7th, 2010 at 11:27am
  • x.MrsAlexGaskarth.x

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    Woooo I know this is gonna sound like loobys commment but....
    Bitch slap!!!!
    Oh yeah, slow mo Ollie puching Charlotte :))))
    Cat Fight!!!!!!!!!
    Lol
    Anyways More soon :))))))
    November 2nd, 2010 at 07:57pm
  • Moosey

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    WOOOOO
    BITCH SLAP!
    AND CAT FIIIIIIIIIGHT!
    herhehehehehehrhehrhehrhehrhehusdctksegn rsecgnvtdrmhst'
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    Moar soon plz :3
    November 1st, 2010 at 09:08pm
  • GlitterMonsterx3

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    oh i loved it so much!
    October 31st, 2010 at 09:56pm
  • x.MrsAlexGaskarth.x

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    Yay another A-MAZING update :DDD
    Is everything OK now?
    Sorry I had to go, I didn't want to cos I wanted to make sure you were OK.
    :DDDD xxx
    October 25th, 2010 at 12:37pm
  • Moosey

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    Good update hunnie ^_^
    How are you feeling?
    October 24th, 2010 at 08:56pm
  • x.MrsAlexGaskarth.x

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    Awwwwww I'm like nearly crying.

    Hehe good updates.

    You had better update soon :D
    October 15th, 2010 at 07:49pm
  • Moosey

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    The tension is killing meh! X3
    Never stop writing hun, you're doing amazing
    Moar soon plz :3
    October 15th, 2010 at 04:11pm
  • x.MrsAlexGaskarth.x

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    Hehe loobys comment made me lol
    Blahhhhhh
    OMG ,e has made like an amazing signature thing like lol
    Hmmmmm....
    Very good updates hun...
    Moar sooon????!?!?!?!??!

    :DDDDDDD
    October 11th, 2010 at 09:12pm
  • Moosey

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    Dun dun dunnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
    nnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
    nnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
    nnnnnnnn...

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    I'm done now ^^

    Good update, ish makin' me all excited and giggly and frustraited and angry and paraleptic and hormonal and ummm...IMPATIENT!
    moar soon :3

    P.S sorry if this comment doesn't make any sense, I just spent 3 hours in a car after drinking a load of alcohol and sugar :3
    October 10th, 2010 at 09:23pm
  • x.MrsAlexGaskarth.x

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    Yaysiez hehe me is like the second commenter.
    Good me is liking this story.
    Update soon...ish?!?!
    Pwetty pwease?!?!?!
    xDD
    October 6th, 2010 at 08:54pm
  • Moosey

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    Yays, u get another star cuzzah me :D
    Anyways, good start, I'm very interested now :D
    Moarrrrrrr :3
    October 5th, 2010 at 10:45pm
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