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  • Snow Horror

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    i actually loved this. amazing writing....
    November 26th, 2012 at 06:06am
  • Teenage Memories

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    This is so god. I loved it. It reminded me of my old crush for five years. He's off to college now and probably actually has forgotten my name.
    November 26th, 2012 at 05:29am
  • Unexpected.

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    ah, i really sorta wanted to know his name :(
    hehe, but the ending was pretty original and cute (:
    January 18th, 2011 at 04:39am
  • sullen paper planes

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    Whoa, that was a really great story. I love the ending.
    So I'm about to write my first slash. Any tips?
    November 22nd, 2010 at 12:59am
  • reapervampire

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    Nice ending XD. Imma smack Ryan and make him die.
    November 4th, 2010 at 07:45am
  • IxJustxLaugh

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    Ahw cute :) it makes me think of me and someone but I think they know my name hopefully lol
    October 29th, 2010 at 03:39am
  • TooLateTheHero

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    First off, I liked the layout you made, it was nice to look at and easy to read; I appreciate that. Secondly, I like how you used your 'less' in your story, it fit in well and worked nicely =] Also, I liked how there was a bit of a twist at the end, I kind of new Rob was going to resurface somehow but I wasn't sure how exactly. Great story ^_^
    October 29th, 2010 at 02:45am
  • Weird Beard

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    Ah that was so good!
    It's not difficult to read this and identify with the 'unrequited love' theme and it really was realistic. I actually loved it. I'm kind of gutted we didn't find out the protagonist's name, but I think the mystery adds to the anonymous charm of the story.
    :)
    October 29th, 2010 at 01:56am