First off, I liked the layout you made, it was nice to look at and easy to read; I appreciate that. Secondly, I like how you used your 'less' in your story, it fit in well and worked nicely =] Also, I liked how there was a bit of a twist at the end, I kind of new Rob was going to resurface somehow but I wasn't sure how exactly. Great story ^_^
Ah that was so good! It's not difficult to read this and identify with the 'unrequited love' theme and it really was realistic. I actually loved it. I'm kind of gutted we didn't find out the protagonist's name, but I think the mystery adds to the anonymous charm of the story. :)