January 2nd, 2011 at 03:39am
This was tragic, and really powerful. It's odd to come across stories like this, realistic stories. And the fact that it was patriotic made it seem even more original. It was really well written. The commander is a total asshole. Hmph. :l
Great job. (:
I think you did a fantastic job with this. It's very descriptive and emotional. (: