I really love it, it is very true to them. I can really see Brian being that way. Stefan, seems very shy, which is similar to the way he is. I just love how crazy it is. But please update soon. Your writing flows perfectly.
I thought this title was good :) Calen! I love that name, I've never heard it before aww there is a little lonely boy swinging? aw :( oh, he's not a little boy. He's a drunk teenager his guitar is his bitch x) haha I like that Brian seems like someone who is having a hard time n life he's smoking too much, drinking too much, and being mean to his parents I have a feeling he has something against them. though they do seem kind of too perky for me as well oh my gosh! his dad talks to his son that way?! no wonder he's so mad at the world. I loved this first chapter. It gave an insight on all the characters at once :)