December 8th, 2010 at 04:33am
wow, all I can say, is that this was.. different.
Not bad different, just different.
I really liked it though.
Honestly, I didn't expect what turned out in the story; I had no idea it would be about - pretty much heaven, and certainly not god.
It's a lovely drabble though. :)
Um, I'm trying to think of more things to make this comment more substancial? :P
You write well - your style is very easy to understand, and you don't seem to have grammar errors that I could see.
Also, very good description - I could really visualize what you were describing - the little angle, the wheel, god (and especially his eyes)
All in all, I like this very much. :)
As a Christian, I do have a few other things to say. I don't think God would just all of the sudden change the way things are done in Heaven. God's ways are perfect and they're never going to need changing, so I thought that was an odd plot.
But other than that, you've done a really great job here!