Hello Sheffield - Comments

I will try to make this a legitimate comment, but I've getting older, ya know?
Writing chapter-long comments really takes it out of me. Bless my old soul.

This chapter was a filler but it cleared a lot of things up. I love the fact that Liv is working at Oli's clothing company and that his Mum loves her so much. I also really liked the way you described Liv's Mum as "killing people with kindness." I think I know exactly what you mean.

Zeus is too adorable for words dhfbvhdsfhjvdgj.

Matt and I are perfection and daaaaawwwww Kelly and Lee <3
I love this story and I'm so excited for the tour to start and omfg Matt and I are gonna get in so much trouble and we'll pull pranks on everyone and shfvbhjdbjhbsj it will just be perfect.

I was quite content with a lovely, fluffy, filler chapter, but then Kate had to ruin things. I dislike her immensly. I don't like her threats. What the fuck is she gonna do? Burn down Oli's house? Kill Zeus? kjgkjhnfjbnskjbdsbjhbjkbjbdsbjbdjfb

I am a wee bit scared of Kate.

Also I love Matty Nicholls.

Okay bye.

P.S. HUSTLER REVOLUTION 2K11. NEVER FORGET.

Fuck you're an amazing writer. This has to be my favorite story on Mibba right now. It makes me feel bubbly. (:

yay updates :D
loved loved loved it :D

Love the story so far :)
I'm from sheffield!!:D

Oh and I think it's really sweet how oli and liv haven't even been together that long but they have such an amazing bond :D

Now the next chapter shall be dedicated to sexy time with oli :3

Oh my gosh ! So happy right now , that douche needed a beating !!

Well done lovely :)

I'm gonna cry
I'm gonna cry
I'm gonna cry okay.
OH MY GOD he's so sweet to her, asdklfjhaslkdjchalkwejrfhlaskdf.
I've officially married this story.
Please update soon c':

I don't like this story at all. I'm just commenting to save the children... FOR THE CHILDREN.

And MAYBE I like this story.

A little bit.

Kinda of.

;D

Haha aw this chapter was really fucking cute! Oli is so great to her, he did the right thing going after that guy.

Okay. First off, fuck Daniel. & that lady's stupid for firing liv. Oliver is so adorably cute I can't even handle it. I'm so very glad Oliver fucked him up but I wonder if that's the last of it..
I wonder what will happen with Kate..
And when liv was about to tell Oliver she could go to warped tour I was sure she was going to ask him to go to her parents house with her, but warped will be ten thousand times better than that.
ANYWAY. You're an amazingly talented writer and your ideas are wicked good. I cannot wait to read more!

I can't believe he actually went to go beat his ass :O

AMAZING CHAPTER. Daniel totally deserved that, but I think that will fuel the fire. Maybe things will calm down while everyone is away at Warped? So excited to find out what happens next. Also, did you make out with the kid from English?

ohhhh
i wonder wats gonna happen with daniel
but yayyy they are goin on warped :D

Holy shit, what the fuck, Daniel??? This is getting intense! Woman, you better bloody update. I hope Oli doesn't do anything that might get him into too much trouble... like murder someone. Can't wait for the next chapter!

xx Saskia

P.S Hoping you go and hook-up with your English buddy now ;)

Holy shit, what the fuck, Daniel??? This is getting intense! Woman, you better bloody update. I hope Oli doesn't do anything that might get him into too much trouble... like murder someone. Can't wait for the next chapter!

xx Saskia

P.S Hoping you go and hook-up with your English buddy now ;)

Oh, Daniel, you f*ed up ^^
Can't wait for the next one :)

P.S. Do it!!

Oh my gosh !!

Please update !! :)

lol good luck in english(: hope the guy is good looking though lol

Daniel is a d-bag!!!! D:<
update soon..? :]
and have fun in English hun ;]