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  • bealiveplaydead

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    I was not expectin that
    Daniel is a twat!
    October 6th, 2011 at 06:49pm
  • LonelyInASeaOfStars

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    This is, i think, my favorite story :D
    You are an amazing writer and very creative :3
    Have fun in english ;)
    October 6th, 2011 at 10:32am
  • zillyboo

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    Shit just hit the fan...
    October 6th, 2011 at 03:36am
  • micayla morphine .

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    is the person u sit next to in english at least decent looking? ;) lol oohhhhhhhhh i likey some tension. and no one messes with oliver or olivia or else ull get fucked. ^^ and not in a sexual way....
    October 6th, 2011 at 03:07am
  • JaffaCakes

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    If he's hot, do it! X
    October 6th, 2011 at 01:08am
  • YourPantsAreMissing

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    update more! haha c:
    i'm dying to find out what's going to happen to daniel.
    October 5th, 2011 at 10:38pm
  • lex;

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    i'm nervous...oli's about to fuck some shit up
    October 5th, 2011 at 07:10pm
  • Loud Papers

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    I can't wait to see what oliver does..
    October 5th, 2011 at 03:56pm
  • lumy.

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    I love this story! :D

    Have fun in English.. ;D
    October 5th, 2011 at 01:50pm
  • ivxiimmx

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    omfg! freaking out right now, I always think this story is so good it can't get better and then you surprise me every time! I love it. can't wait to see what Oli is gonna do now.
    October 5th, 2011 at 11:15am
  • omegatoaster

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    Okay, so I've been following your stories for a while now, lurking around, checking for updates obsessively and the like, and I figured it was time to actually give some feed back. You are an amazing writer with tons of potential. I also want to thank you for having good grammar because that is a difficult thing to find these days. I'll try not to be a silent reader anymore!
    October 5th, 2011 at 08:20am
  • hellxoxsunshine

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    dont keep me waiting that fucking long. jesus.
    October 5th, 2011 at 07:59am
  • vices

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    I love how Oliver's so protective of Liv(-:
    It's just so cute, ugh.
    Please update soon!
    I can't wait for Daniel's ass to be grass.
    October 5th, 2011 at 06:55am
  • KatieYDG

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    Well I sure didn't see that coming! I'm so excited to see what happens next. Oli seems really pissed, I wouldn't be suprised if Oli actually kills him lol.
    October 5th, 2011 at 06:53am
  • Colorful_dinos

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    Oh my gosh! I seriously can't wait for the next chapter ahh!
    October 5th, 2011 at 06:36am
  • KatieYDG

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    So, I just read all 18 chapters. I absolutely love it! You're such a great writer. :) Oli and Liv are such a cute couple, I hope nothing bad happens to them. Especially when he leaves for Warped Tour! Something really bad needs to happen to that Kate girl!! XD She's so mean. -_- Anyways, please update soon lol.
    September 24th, 2011 at 05:01am
  • three-imaginaryboys

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    This last update....was absolutely amazing. You captures each characters personality so well. I feel like I'm right there with them. I cannot wait to read more.
    September 17th, 2011 at 06:35am
  • Mali

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    Oh shit, that Kate slut better watch her back. Haha Oli was MAD. Poor little Liv :( I have a feeling this Kate thing isn't over?

    ANYWAY. Aw Lawdy they seww coott..!!! Hahaha I think this chapter made mr fall even more in love with Oli? Can't wait to see how this 'week' works out, hey? Update soon :D xx
    September 16th, 2011 at 11:39am
  • septicemia.

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    I'm loving this :) And I'm glad I just read that it's not even half way complete!
    Cannot wait for more
    -subscribes-
    September 15th, 2011 at 03:59pm
  • Clik

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    What a bitch , I knew she was from the start .

    But AWHHHHHHHHH ! That was sooo cute ! :)
    September 14th, 2011 at 08:07am
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