May 26th, 2011 at 08:16pm
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May 14th, 2011 at 03:55am
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NOOOOOO!!!!! You can't leave it at that!!!!! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!! D: I think I'm going to die DDD: Poor.... Everyone. Except Kate. Kate. Is. A. Whore. Period. Fucking bitch >:( I'd kill her... If were a fictional character in your head :D haha, but yes, no matter how horrible the party was, you wrote it incredibly realistically. It was fantastic really. Everyones emotions were so clear and I kind of like Daniel (: Ven if he's nothing compared to Oli.. He's still cute, haha. And nice. Im sure well all here more of him too, aye?
Anyway! UPDATE SOON! I want the boys to come back, like, now. So JPDARE UPDATE UPDATE :D promise to comment! xxMay 12th, 2011 at 12:47pm -
I just found this, and I'm totally in love with it already. It's the first BMTH fic I've ever read, 'cos I only got proper into the band a month or so ago, but it's set the bar really high for any others I might read!
Oh, and I honestly knew Kate was bad news from the start...
I really cannot wait to read the next chapter!May 12th, 2011 at 08:23am -
that was unexpected.
i can't wait to read what's up next!May 12th, 2011 at 03:51am -
I hate Kate and Oli is pissing me off!!! Why should Liv wait for Oli who overreacts and has major trust issues. If I were her I would be so mad I mean seriously nothing happened and he said he believes her.... Grrr I wish I could slap some sense into Oli!!!May 11th, 2011 at 07:48am
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pure mint update.
I LOVED IT.
but poor Liv, why in the world would Kate actually send it?
That's just a proper bitch right there :S
ANYWAYS.
please update soon?
I LOVE THIS STORY.
I started spazzing when I saw it was updated :33
so yeah!May 11th, 2011 at 01:54am -
AWE FUCK THAT BITCH!!! haaaaaaate herrrrrrMay 10th, 2011 at 11:48pm
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Ew, Kate's gross. You better update this quickly. i CANNOT wait. At all.May 10th, 2011 at 08:13pm
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Oh my gosh poor Olivia
Thanx for the update it was really goodMay 10th, 2011 at 06:54am -
love it im sooo subsribingMay 3rd, 2011 at 01:01am
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How'd I not find this earlier!May 2nd, 2011 at 02:58pm
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damn.
when's he gonna bone Liv? ;DDD
LOL.
anyways.
I LOVED THE UPDATE<3
please update soon.
yeup.May 1st, 2011 at 07:28am -
I'm loving thIs story even more continue :DApril 28th, 2011 at 04:01am
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Oh my god YAY! Haha finallyy! That was just too funny (: I love how she saluted him before crowd surfing (: I'd be too fuckin chicken to jump into a crowd of Oli lovers after kissing him right into front of them though ;) Was an awesome chapter! Now let's just see how this tour plays out, hey? *raises eyebrows*
Can't wait for an update! That was great :D
xx SaskiaApril 28th, 2011 at 12:32am -
OH my god, that's so awesome! she went CROWD SURFING! It sounds awesome. I loved it! It was a great update, can't wait for the next one :)April 27th, 2011 at 11:18pm
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Love this story !April 27th, 2011 at 07:58am
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HOLYSWEETMOTHEROFJESUS.
UPDATE!April 27th, 2011 at 07:33am -
OH YEAH!!! NOW THATS WHAT IM TALKIN ABOUT!!!April 27th, 2011 at 06:00am
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Only nine chapters so far?! Oh the agony!
Haha, I love this a lot. It's well-written and obviously well thought out.
I like how honest and blunt Liv seems. I like how she and Oli are just friends but they still both know that there's a little something more between them. It's adorable.
"Oliver and Olivia like olives."
I cracked up at that part. I just pictured drunk people laughing so I did. It was pretty funny.
I really hope that you aren't an author who waits a month for every update. If I could make people comment I would, because I know how much it sucks to only get a couple comments for each chapter.
But this is really well done. I like it a lot and can't wait to see how Oli and Liv's relationship plays out. (Btw, I'm glad you didn't turn this into a love triangle between Oli, Liv, and Matty. That would've been so cliche.)
I'm definitely going to comment more and subscribe. Update soon. I'll be waiting. :)April 25th, 2011 at 10:09am
Poor Liv :(
Update soon <3