Forgetmenots and Second Thoughts - Comments

So I know it's been 6 years since this story has been updated, but I took the time to re-read it tonight, after going through my old subscriptions. This is one of the few Billie/OC Green Day stories on this website that is bursting with life and deserves so much attention. I know it's unlikely you'll see this, and I'm sure even if you do, you've probably grown away from the world of writing fanfiction, but this story is fantastic and I hope that one day it will find an ending. Now that I'm older and have been through... some things, I relate to Wren so much more and I feel for her so deeply. The emotions are very real and vivid and you capture it all perfectly. I just thought you should know.

Oh damn. I actually believed Ingrid, but I'm glad Wren kept with Billie and left, she needs to be out of that house. :O Is Beille going to do what I think he is? ; )

Update por favor.

Definitely gets intense :D I kind of feared there would be a confrontation with Charlie... and I hope that I'm wrong about my theory about her father because that would be really creepy. Loved the update :)

Ok, I'm really starting to fall in love with this story! I love the update! I might also go read your friends story too, but I don't know if I'll get to because all the stories I subscribed to had been updated over night. I will get to it though. Can't wait for another update! BTW This is one of my favorite stories on here!

Loved the update it was intense when they got back to the house. I was afraid something may happen with charlie or something...thank god the creep was asleep. Hmmm but who is the father? I cant wait to find out, and am excited to see how the story developes even more :)
Youre such a great writer
Hope to see another update soon ha

Awesome!! I loved this chapter. The descriptions were breathtaking, and I'm really liking how the characters are all developing as time passes. I have a feeling that her father is going to pay somewhat of an important role...hm....more soon?

Absolutely amazing. You're such an absolutely crazy-good writer. This is one of my favorite stories on Mibba, and the chapter was awesome, as always. I love this story. And, I loved the chaper. :D

Fantastic chapter!!! I'm excited at where this story is going, with her father and all. I also feel like there's no way Ingrid is out of the picture entirely...
Speaking of which, they way she confronted Wren was NOT expected. I almost felt sorry for her. I feel like she really didn't want Wren to leave...

Hey well I finally finished reading it. Sorry it took so long I got distracted and my internet got disconnected. I really really like it and can't wait for an update. This story really is a roller coaster ride and I love it! Please update soon!

Ok I want to say that I love your story, and thank you for mentioning my best friend, visions_of_blasphemy. She's actually one of my best friends that I met through my sister and we hang out a lot. He stories are really good and she deserves so much more recognition. Thank you for supporting her you instantly earn my friendship!

I just found this story a few days ago and have spent alot of my free time reading it. This story is absolutely amazing. I love all the detail you put into it. And in the last chapter it may have been sappy but it was so freakin cute I could have died. The chapter charlie raped her was terrifying...Im almost ashamed to say I had to sleep with my light on because of it hah. But that just proves you are a really great writer.
And I cannot wait for your next update :)

THEY KISSED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THEY KISSED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

But for real, you need to become a writer in the future, you're amazing at description<3

Ok I've just started reading this and I LOVE IT!!! I've read to chapter 3, I need to get off for now, but I will comment when I get it read all the way though!

You're descriptions are bad ass. It's awesome.

I love the layout. I will, however, have to agree with disassociative. on the font though. It hurt my eyes as well. Then again, I wasn't really wearing my glasses either.

Anyhow, I really, really love the start of this. Your descriptions are truly amazing as are your choice of words. I feel like I'm actually reading this out of some famous author's book. I love it.
I do feel sorry for Wren though. I could never imagine having such a relationship with my Mom like that.

I'm certainly going to finish this when I get the chance.

Well, I've gotten through the first chapter, my only complaint is the font size is too small. It hurt my eyes.
Anyways, your descriptions are just...amazing. It feels like I'm reading it straight out of a book. I feel kind of sorry for Wren, having a mother who doesn't even let her call her 'mom'. I don't think I could call my mom by her name o.O That'd be weird.

Ah crap, got off topic. Anywho, the layout did match the story quite well and just overall, its a great piece of work.
:D

I liked it a lot :D And the way everything turned out between them. I almost wish it worked like that in the real world haha :D It almost seemed like they were reading their minds at that moment :)
If there was the rating like on Mibba I would give this story 5/5 (I bet others would do it too!)

YAY, new chapter! I really liked it. Like, a lot. They are so cute together! Can't wait for more.

awww this chapter was sappy but soooo cute!! And it was really well written. You were so descriptive with everything it was great. Like, I loved how much detail you put into describing his guitar- it's something almost never mentioned in stories. And yah, the kiss scene just turned me into goo! lol
Cannot wait for a new chapter :D

I am in loveee!
omg WREN AND BILLIE FOREVER!
I wanted to melt as I was reading the kiss scene
Keep it up darling, I cant wait for the next update xo♥