Wow, this is amazing! <33 Both of you are lovely writers and I hope there's more soon! What happened to Olivia? I bet it has something to do with her mom...
And I agree with the comment above; Mikey and Olivia would be so much better together. They just seem to fit better. But Gerard's awesome, so either way is fine with me! XD
Worth the wait! Aw, the tender moment between Olivia and Mikey was adorable. I'm literally starting the next chapter now. That's how much I love this story. Wait, but whose point of view...?
Please update :) Olivia liking Gerard is really cute, actually =3 and of course, Mikey liking Olivia is too :) Now what would make this better is HAVE FRANK AND RAY BE GAY. XDDDDD Kidding :) But I did like this, and I hope you two update soon!! xoxo, - G.
This makes me sad. Really sad. Olivia seems interesting. :D And does she like Gerard or something? You made it seem like it. Or I'm just misreading again. xD Curse my non-ability to read normally sometimes.
Woo! You've given me a lot of awesome stuff to work with!
Thanks so much for this chapter; it's awesome! I'm gonna try to get the next update in fairly quickly so that I can read more of your amazing chapters! <3
Is it lame that I'm commenting on our own story? (Of course not!) This was gooood! I'm excited with where it's going. I'm almost finished with the 2nd chapter and I'll definitely post tonight. Yay, I'm loving this <3 mwah!
YOUR COMMENT VIRGINITY HAS BEEN STOLEN! Maybe.. If somebody hasn't taken it already. >.< Anywho, THOSE ABUSERS NEED TO BE PUT IN A BOX AND THROWN INTO AN OCEAN OF WATERSPOUTS! Thank you, that is all. Kidding. I really like where this is going. I know they'll make it big! :D Update again soon? ^~^
October 19th, 2010 at 02:46am
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