I liked this story a lot, Though it never mentions Sin's foster home and etc. In the Character's section, It says he's always moving from one foster home to another, But in the story, it was only faintly mentioned in the first 2-3 chapters. And truth be told, He didn't really try to keep his distance from Jakel. Also, I don't know why... But the story felt rushed which is unusually in your writing.
I'm not trying to hate because I love your stories, I love them all actually, But this one was sort of a disappointment in my eyes. Either way, it wasn't bad. There are many stories out there that are worse, Sadly, mine being one of them, So I would say this story, rating from a one to ten, I would rate it a six point five.
I hope I don't sound mean or anything, I'm not trying to hate, Just trying to give my opinions.
I was really into this story, all happy with the characters and the plot, and then it just ended. I was all excited too. Everything was cute and perfect, but I felt like it would have been better with more. Thank you for the story. I enjoyed it nonetheless(: Everything was adorable.
im getting ANNOYED not by the story but by a certain part. How the heck can Jakel be mad at Sin when he caused all that crap. My blood is boiling because if he didn't start any of this crap none of that would've happened. So you know what? STHU JAKEL!!!!!!!!!!!!
Just started reading this, but I love it :) I can't believe you only have two pages of comments for 15 frikin chapters! That's ridiculous! Well, I hope all their problems get resolved because I don't like them being sad. :(