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I'm Your Zero (100)

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I approve of this. I really do. I definitely do. It's sad :/ It made me pretty sad. It really did. Update this soon mmmkay? Also I adore Dawson.

April 1st, 2011 at 03:26am

youth and whiskey. (415)

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This is really interesting. I suggest you space your paragraphing better, but I like it. I love stories on this subject, though it is controversial and heart-breaking. You've done a fantastic job on this story so far. Your writing flows together quite well.

January 10th, 2011 at 03:56am

Problem Child (100)

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hahaha

Calm yourself prospector.

What a fantastic rehearsal day that was :)

Oh and i dig your story btw.

October 30th, 2010 at 10:28pm

Shall We Run? (100)

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nom nommm

October 14th, 2010 at 08:52pm

Baby dry my tears (100)

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OMG this is so good xD

October 14th, 2010 at 07:06pm

b3horses (100)

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I
LOVE
IT

October 9th, 2010 at 06:21am

JW94 (100)

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I am in complete awe....
That was incredible, dark, and hauntingly beautiful.
I was amazed at your description, it was so sharp and real.
Seriously one of the best stories I have read on here :]
Please up date....I can't wait to read more! Suscribing!
You are a talented writer.

October 9th, 2010 at 05:44am