Little Mini Bert - Comments

Dear God. I'm so sorry.

It has been a very, extremely, intensely, dramatically long time since I ever even /read/ an update, let alone drop you off a review of my thoughts on the story. I feel very bad about it. I really loved this story, too. Either I'm very lazy or very busy. Or both. I'm not sure. It doesn't matter. Anyways, let me try and catch up, alright? I'll be commenting on chapters five to nine. The rest of the story, I see. That makes me pretty sad. I like reading stories from front to back without waiting for an update, so this works out, right?

Hah. Jeeze, Bert. Yes, take a baby horse on stage. That's not a bad idea. >> Like. What if the thing falls off the stage? Or if it attacks on of the band members? Or if she gets scared and dies of a heart attack? God. That would be so damn sad. If the horse had a stroke or something I'd cry. My Cocoa died from a stroke a couple years ago. So I know how awful they are, tough I'm not sure the difference between a stroke of a Guinea pig and a horse.

Hahaha. The Jepha tackling Bert thing pretty much killed me. I love Jepha. Heh. I've slammed into a ton of people I know many a time, myself. I love it. Especially when they fall down. >> And man. My dad's getting guitar hero next Sunday. Then I'll be able to play it. I'm excited.

Death Note is on now. So to not loose all of this, I'll post it and finish after the show.

And it's finished... and what a great way to end it. Planning to show Frank how to clean up after the best present he’d ever received. Meep!

Bert, you break my heart, you big sweet freak. I'm so happy that Bert was allowed to keep horsie in the first place, and the epilogue just tops it.

awwwwwwwwwwwww cute!! it was a good small story :D:P lolz ;
will we ever knwo the song he was working on :D:P ^^ ;)

that. was. friggin. adorable! i luff the story soooo much more now...thanks for finalyy putting it up lol

omg!!!!!!!!!! byay finnally!!!! more soon plzz... it was great :)(:

WEEEEEEE!!!!! :D

*flail* dude...that was amazing...i officially love you now *hugs*...cheers mate XD

omg!! that took me like 5 times to understand what your were saying./. and now i'm like die!! soo many questions that must remain unanswered :(
nooo grrrrrrr!!!
please!! write more!! i really like this story and waited soo long for the uypdate ::DP

gah!! what's going on!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11 *tears* need more!! :O ;)

I really liked this! How sweet! And I like the sort-off truce that came between Bert and Gee because of it...

Very nicely written, and definitely entertaining!

that's pretty much the cutest thing I have ever read. Mini Bert... ha. It's a girl. Bert's really sweet in person, but my friend thinks he's an asshole. It's really sweet how you made him turn out with the horse & Gerard and stuff.

ohhhhhh.... you have Dan. *drools all over the keyboard and shorts it*

Where's the pretty background picture? Did you remove it so no one would think this was about a horse and stuff? Or did you just not like it? D= It was adorable. I miss it. Baaah. I don't even know why I'm disappointed that a picture was taken down from the story's layout. That's pretty stupidly low, actually. I'm listening to Senses Fail. I'm not sure why that needs to be in my comment. But. It's my comment. So I can mention Senses Fail in it. Time to really comment instead of letting you read this spam! But.. but... but. Spam is awesome.

“Uh… No one’s home!” Bert inwardly cringed as he shouted the words. Really? Seriously? “Come back later.”

I really don't mind if that's messed up, at this point. But man. Bert is awesome! I mean, if I tried to get into somebody's house and they told me they wern't home, I'd totally try to come back later. .__. Bert's adorable. And extremely bright. xD Sorry. But that was the best thing I've heard all week. Man. Your story is so uplifting. Whenever I feel like crying all I should have to do is read another of your stories (doesn't matter about what) and I guarantee I'll leave with some sort of smile.

Awh. He likes Quinn.

Okay i'll be honest with you. When I read this I thought, "Gah another Bert's baby sister story."
But then I read on and I was just like what the heck is this person on writing about Bert and a horse.
Still I read on, and I was amazed. I liked it A LOT!

haha..aww =]

What the fuck is up with the story quote ?!

I'm sorry for the few-day-delay. I'm trying to get better at commenting and reading on the spot, but I'm doing horrible with that at the moment. Right now, there's twenty more updates siting in my inbox that I still need to get to. Heh ^^;;, let me take now to apologize for anytime in the future that I also may be delayed to give you a comment or review (whatever you call it) as soon as you update. I'm sorry. D=

Dude. I cannot tell you how intensely I get excited to read and comment this story. By far, this has become one of my favorite fan fictions/pieces of writing I've ever read. Do I get to be the Little Mini Bert fan? I could, you know, make buttons and t-shirts and posters and stuff. I'm not sure where I'm going with that. But, it seems like fate reversed itself for Bert. He decided not to call Quinn, then the guy calls him instead, Funny, how these things work out. Of course, nothing about the horse came up yet, so Bert's safe by that so far.

“You okay? You sound kinda…different…” Quinn drew in a deep breath. “Please don’t tell me-”

“No! I’m fine. I just got a little sidetracked.”

“Don’t lie to me, Bert. Are you still on drugs?” Bert sighed in response. He hated when Quinn could figure things out so quickly. Before he could even answer, his friend responded. “I’m coming over there. See you in a few.”

I realize that took up a lot of space, but I felt I had to leave every word into it as I copied it down into my comment. I know it seems in Bert's... nature to be into drugs or whatever the fuck it is he's stereotyped for doing, but as many times as he's done it in the past, that doesn't make it fine for him to be ruining himself with that stuff. As hard as Quinn's visit might make things for Bert, I can't blame Quinn. He's only trying to help. It's also not good for the horse to be exposed to whatever kinds of intoxications he has, just for the sake of the horse's health.

YAY! LITTLE HORSIE!!!!! ME LIKEY FOALS! moo

Aww, Poor Berty. hahaha nice one though.

You advertised this in a journal. Fucking thank you so much for doing that. Like. Man. I can't even say how bright that made my day turn out to be. The whole time, while reading it, I was all smiling and laughing at Bert and the horse, it wasn't even sane. I'm the person who laughed at Saw II last night, at any visual of violence and torture and killing. So. I'm not usually the one to find something "adorable," putting some kind of cheesy romance aside from the snapshots.

I was surprised when it was a horse. I mean, I was thinking "oh, Bert's girlfriend or wife or whatever has a baby, or he finds a one somewhere." Never in my imagination did I stop to wonder if it wasn't a human at all, which made me a little stunned to initially see the background that had a horse in it. But the next thing I know is he's looking down at a tiny little horse some body's given to him. I, for one, want to know who gave him the animal.

Smart Bert. Not giving the poor thing wine and all. That'd be awful, actually, to give the horse liquor. How thankful I am that he had an apple, though I hope it's not oh-so-old that the horse gets sick from it. This should be interesting, to read Bert trying to tame and raise a horse. It does seem a little...
-cringes.- Cute to read.

I loved it

ekkk it was a horsie =]]]]]

sounds like such a cutie

keep writting =]

Well, I was about to say that this story was "cute", but then I managed to remember that I don't think that would fit my nature at all, and would come out completely distorted.
Anyway, I love this. Without saying that it's cute, it is incredibly different and very unique =D. I don't usually read Bert stories, but this one was interesting.