I was just re-reading all the competition entries and realized that i hadn't left you a comment! Oops! :S I totally agree with Chachi two spots up from me, this is one of the best one shots i've ever read. It tells a very good story - and the beginning was wonderfully confusing (in a very good way.) :D The dialogue was really realistic as well, I always love reading stories where what they're saying is actually believable. Over all, it was awesome. (x
I really like this one (as I generally do all of your stuff, dearie). It was intense... and well-written, which is always a plus! :P Um... so yeah. Love youuuuuuuuu <3