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  • Invisible Bullet

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    i loveed it!
    now i feel happy for brendon but protective all at the same time!
    December 22nd, 2010 at 03:30am
  • Loor

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    Ryden <3. I have no clue why, but they kind of are my guilty pleasure :).
    I like this plot, very cute.
    But I must say that there are quite a lot of writing errors, which make the story kind of hard to read at moment! Maybe next time you should have someone beta it before you post. I do that for my stories and let me tell you, someone else's eyes can do wonders for your story!
    October 11th, 2010 at 01:58pm
  • nadhiyong

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    You said, "I hoped you liked it" and I REALLY LIKE IT! XD
    Ryan's OMG makes me think 'bout Justin Bieber, lol

    Oh, those typos. Don't forget it ;)

    I'm the first reviewer yaaaay, you should give me a gift, loljk ;p
    Keep writing! I love this rydon <3
    October 11th, 2010 at 07:45am
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