This story is almost too sad to read.But I am gonna anyway cause I like it.I cannot believe how much of an idiot Rian is...I knew I never like Hey Monday for some reason xD
Rian you absolute bastard. He LOVES you. How could you forget?! How could you forget to call Zack?! Fuck Cass. Stop stalking your boyfriend and let him go to his right guy >:(
Erm. I actually don't like Hayley in this D: Well, not so far. I love the Jalex but she just appears, tells them they get no girls and then yells at them to kiss, kind of ruining the moment D: Maybe I'll like her better as the story progresses, idk. I do like Hayley irl but she just sorta irritated me here XD
Otherwise, good story :D Rianbb is TOTALLY missing Zack. He needs to realise he loves Zack, not Cass, like, now. Else there will be chaos D: Update sooooon ^__^
OH MY GOD. Alex, seriously, Dora the Explorer? :') You know the real Alex would probably watch that as well, so you're good at character portrayal :') But yeah, sad times ;___; Zackbb why leave before Rian's birthday but be there for Alex's? (I'm assuming you're using their real birthdays, and ofc Alex's is on the 14th...) And I'm gonna guess what's in the letter. LOVE IT :D Will now pester you to put another chapter up again :D
I just knew you'd mention the new Good Charlotte album somewhere in this story
I think Rian's starting to realize what he's missing out on with being with Cass and not Zack. Annnnd I don't want Zack to do anything stupid, I'll cry so much if he does...
I've just sat and cried my way through the last two updates. Right now, I have Rian and Cass so fucking much. They should break up and Rian should be with Zack. Now.
FINALLY managed to get onto this :D Aww Jackbb <3 You fit some Merrikat into there Sav! Nice one :D ZACK TELL HIMMMM D: D: D: YOU'RE GONNA KEEP CRYING OTHERWISE ;__;
I started giggling at "blithering idiot" and then felt utterly horrible for doing so because Zack.
I'm torn between hugging him and smacking him right now. He needs to talk to Rian, properly, or he's going to be miserable forever because Rian will be blissfully oblivious to his pain and will keep on with this Cassadee girl. Hmph. But he's so pitiful when he cries. D: I just wanna hug him and squeeze him and tell him it'll be okay. It'll be okay, right? Right? D:
I REMEMBER YOU SHOWING ME THIS CHAPTER :DDDD I love it. The Jalex are so so so so adorable <3 Tell him Alex :3 :3 :3 And Zack. you should say something tooooo D:
So I'm thinking Rian's subconscious is constantly yelling at him to jump Zack and smother him with kisses, except he's not very good at listening to his subconscious and he gets a bit confused trying to understand exactly what it means (strange things, subconsciouses, you never know what they're on about) so he ends up sending all these ~mixed messages. Hence general confusion and assholery ensues. Though it was sweet of him to stay with Zack and try and cheer him up and stuff. Clearly his subconscious needs to be clearer in its messages of undying love. Hmm.
Anyway, yeah. The ending line was perfect. XD Gotta love Alex. It's good that Zack has so many people he can talk to, so many people who can knock some sense into him because Rian clearly is as much in like with him as he is. So. THEY ARE MEANT TO BE. SRSLY. MEANT TO BE.
Sorry for long time it took to read and comment. But this update is LOVELY. "Some British git". Nice one Zachary :P
Jalex are so cuteee :D Plus I giggled at the "jolting a half asleep Zack awake". Idk, I think it was more cause I had the image then of Zalex cuddled together and then Zack being pushed awake by Alex. Ahh I love this fic <3